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Verse Length - 16 Lines
Verse Due - January 6th, 2023[/B]
@MARION MOTLEY @Slayerr.
Marion Motley
Slayerr.
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House Rules
Verse Length - 16 Lines
Verse Due - January 6th, 2023[/B]
@MARION MOTLEY @Slayerr.
Last edited by Phalanx; January 16th, 2023 at 07:54 PM
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This faggots dead, battling slayerr? I don’t envy that at all
I’ll discard his body n leave no trace like he’s a vote in an MV battle
MM is a gimp that vapes, watch me spark him out like a tekken hero
So when this fight gets out of hand see his elf bar get knocked down to zero
Winless faggot with no accolades, I’ll breeze past you like another day
Coz last time mm won a fight championship, Ben askren was going the other way
U need a personal trainer, coz I’m jacked up and carry a knife
You’ll beat me up this Day? Nah. I’ll record you getting slapped up like his wife
I’m the underdog but I’m gonna son this fag
I’ll rain punches down on u, pathetic fallacy his prediction was wrong in the mag
Ur bars are all dross and prattle I promise I won’t tattle
I peeped ur horrocore battle n ain’t seen a wall of text that bad since blue bayou last lost a battle
You’re past ur best, with boring bars u ain’t a hard test
It’s ironic ur name sake died in the year ur concepts were last considered fresh
This won’t take long that’s a fact see, I can’t shame this mong
I don’t want to undermine your name, but that’s exactly where it belongs
Jack the Ripper was the last time the top killer was a British guy, player
Which fits- when I’m done not even Scotland Yard could identify Slayerr.
This heavy metal Dezzy leads to print shop purchases by your people
Think thrash band merch- I’ll put Slayerr. on a shirt with the Iron Eagle
“Merry belated Christmas”, I mutter at him as I aim for the head shot
I’m Rudolph- to hit a moving target all I do is lead Slay with the red dot
Take your whole country to the English Channel, let em crowd the sea floor
All it took was a “Free Dental Work” cruise ad and a pound of c4
Think chain smoking on stimulants, I’m at your Addy with the cig
Scoop up your bowl cut and leave London with a Paddy Pimblett wig
His bitch said no, she’s on the rag but you know I’m not hearin it
Told her YASSS GURL and then I slayed Slay queen, on periodt
What have you accomplished in a decade, fuck your 1-2 tourney win
It took me one win to get you. You’re a textcee journeyman.
I’m the betting favorite, you thought that was extra odd
But now A Noob Has got your soul like the jackal-headed god
Slayerr
This faggots dead, battling slayerr? I don’t envy that at all
I’ll discard his body n leave no trace like he’s a vote in an MV battle
funny
U need a personal trainer, coz I’m jacked up and carry a knife
You’ll beat me up this Day? Nah. I’ll record you getting slapped up like his wife
Dana white ok cool i see you.
Ur bars are all dross and prattle I promise I won’t tattle
I peeped ur horrocore battle n ain’t seen a wall of text that bad since blue bayou last lost a battle
this wasnt bad but having "battle" in here 3x definitely took a lot of steam out of this punch
vs
MM
Jack the Ripper was the last time the top killer was a British guy, player
Which fits- when I’m done not even Scotland Yard could identify Slayerr.
this was cool good tie ins
“Merry belated Christmas”, I mutter at him as I aim for the head shot
I’m Rudolph- to hit a moving target all I do is lead Slay with the red dot
good take on this concept.
His bitch said no, she’s on the rag but you know I’m not hearin it
Told her YASSS GURL and then I slayed Slay queen, on periodt
the gayness in this bar was TUFF
What have you accomplished in a decade, fuck your 1-2 tourney win
It took me one win to get you. You’re a textcee journeyman.
decent jab here
man i hope to see more battles like this on the Frontlines this year. pretty close over all but Marion had a more polished Verse imo and his misses were to a lesser extent. i feel like Slayerr came more direct but had a couple of personal angles that didnt hit the mark. Good Shit gents
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Originally Posted by Slayerr.
Bar 1 - Tie
Bar 2 - Marion
Bar 3 - Marion
Bar 4 - Slayerr
Bar 5 - Slayerr
Bar 6 - Slayerr
Bar 7 - Tie
Bar 8 - Marion
Honestly, this was close as as fuck. I have it tied in the head to head bar comparison. Both had some misses, but also some good shit. Marion had the 3 of the 4 best bars of the battle.
Vote - Marion
This faggots dead, battling slayerr? I don’t envy that at all
I’ll discard his body n leave no trace like he’s a vote in an MV battle
U need a personal trainer, coz I’m jacked up and carry a knife
You’ll beat me up this Day? Nah. I’ll record you getting slapped up like his wife
vs
This heavy metal Dezzy leads to print shop purchases by your people
Think thrash band merch- I’ll put Slayerr. on a shirt with the Iron Eagle
Take your whole country to the English Channel, let em crowd the sea floor
All it took was a “Free Dental Work” cruise ad and a pound of c4
Think chain smoking on stimulants, I’m at your Addy with the cig
Scoop up your bowl cut and leave London with a Paddy Pimblett wig
good one guys. a lot of light stuff overall so I just outlined the best ones. misses at least were an enjoyable read.
I got montley on this one. I like his style a lot and the verse flowed really well overall
Marion Motley has won by KO. And will face the winner of Fresh/MV at the end of the month.
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