10 Bars
Drop 1 January
MV
Marion Motley
10 Bars
Drop 1 January
Last edited by Phalanx; January 19th, 2023 at 08:15 PM
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Yo I didn’t put two and two together on the due date being NYD. Might have to extend, just giving the heads up now
24hr ext?
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Stop spending your down time in roman bathhouses and fucking get this lame ass shit over with so one or two people will vote on it over the next month.
My avatar is a duck holding an umbrella. You will not be able to refute this.
Sitting down to write now. Will edit my verse into this post by midnight CST
drove mad with hate, every degree of murder i didnt hesitate to graduate
you have a really close family, im here to congratulate. I love seeing blood stick together...when it coagulates
the situation exacerbates when i slit ya wife's throat and use that hole to masturbate
throw your newborn a baby shower, use her hand to clog the drain and let her acid bathe
box cutter to the neck below the cheek filet the meat, the skin gets stretched down
it took a second for me to turn the concept but now i have it all fleshed out
gun powder burns look like chicken pox, u can get holes in the same areas as B.I.G. n Pacs
leave this bitch to rot till the wounds u got drip wit a disgust-n liquid as viscous as pigeon snot
fuck your intentions i get nervous, scrunch up your face when you see me in person
ill think you are plotting behind the scenes n thingsll cut then pull back the curtains
your nuts in hot skillet this worst than fucking unprotected in a brothel
making dad jokes out of your suffering, i bet those fried balls falafel
in a seedy hostel,with a Ouji i invoked Azazels host
crazy thoughts so dark and deep the demons that haunt my soul aint got no hope
go to a forever sleep from a slow choke, having an episode i start to relapse
last thought you have is "oh shit" and the room will smell like that when your bowels relax
ask your bitch where the money at, she dont know? Derringer, hit her with an older strap
knot her each time i ask so im holdn track, ive patience but she only has until the numbers start to overlap
im collecting penance for the afterlife this aint a battle its a sacrifice
you turn a ghastly white,
when u meet my transgender Uncle Jesús, you know my Anti-Christ
Last edited by MV; January 3rd, 2023 at 01:01 AM
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He calls himself a demon, I’ma be the death of this geek
When I pull up on him under that street lamp like the Exorcist priest
Snap it so his neck won’t spasm then I let the death blow tag him
I’ma have this “demon” leaking spinal fluid like it’s ectoplasm
This chrome polished so The Thing mirror his image like a Carpenter flick
Then I’m sparkin’ the blick til the cartridge just clicks
Your family droppin’ like flies, or a dog’s dead fleas
Scrape the face meat in a crockpot, make hog’s head cheese
I was in your kitchen checkin’ out drawings by your kindergarten son
Stick-figure family, square house, and the kindergarten sun
I blew his skull on his little art for fun, sprayed the fridge with carcass crumbs
Then I left a message in his blood: THIS IS FAR FROM DONE
Drawin’ symbols on the walls, use cadavers for an inkwell
Cops approachin’ pension prolly yackin’ from the stink smell
I wear the Reaper’s cologne, kill you and I’m keepin’ the bones
Your severed femur in her cervix turns your wife’s screams into moans
Burn him til he’s oozin’, flesh is drippin’; it’s a gruesome exhibition
Since you’re a pedo, now you’re needin’ Freddy Krueger’s esthetician
Or keep him as a slave, get a poker so hot it sparks
and brand M in the forehead like Vegeta with the Majin mark
drove mad with hate, every degree of murder i didnt hesitate to graduate
you have a really close family, im here to congratulate. I love seeing blood stick together...when it coagulates
im collecting penance for the afterlife this aint a battle its a sacrifice
you turn a ghastly white,
when u meet my transgender Uncle Jesús, you know my Anti-Christ
v
I wear the Reaper’s cologne, kill you and I’m keepin’ the bones
Your severed femur in her cervix turns your wife’s screams into moans
our family droppin’ like flies, or a dog’s dead fleas
Scrape the face meat in a crockpot, make hog’s head cheese
V.MV/good battle,Motley had some good imagery,MV lines were a lil more creative imo, could go either way
drove mad with hate, every degree of murder i didnt hesitate to graduate
you have a really close family, im here to congratulate. I love seeing blood stick together...when it coagulates
fuck this one was good. i'll come back later to vote.
Please do. And thanks for voting the contenders match. You're a real one.Originally Posted by Mac.
This was a pretty dope horrorcore match. Some pretty dark imagery from both. Motley had a butter smooth flow, polished scheme work & LotB w/ the screams to moan shit. But I think he had a few lines Like carpenter flicks/cartridges click that flowed well but felt out of place in the thematic sense. +1 for the DBZ ref tho. MV really excelled here. Some gnarly imagery through out and some dope horrorcore punches w/ coagulate & falafel. The slight edge in consistent imagery and the added wordplays allowed him to edge this. Both of you had your pen games set to Mortal Kombat fatality-mode. Good shit.
Vote - MV
drove mad with hate, every degree of murder i didnt hesitate to graduate
you have a really close family, im here to congratulate. I love seeing blood stick together...when it coagulates
the situation exacerbates when i slit ya wife's throat and use that hole to masturbate
throw your newborn a baby shower, use her hand to clog the drain and let her acid bathe
box cutter to the neck below the cheek filet the meat, the skin gets stretched down
it took a second for me to turn the concept but now i have it all fleshed out
I didnt feel much from marion.. I mean not on a horrorcore level. some were generic, whereas mv really stuck to horrorcore lol. his first 3 bars were bangers and the rest were decent misses or light punches.
got MV here
MV wins by KO.
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