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@Infamous 1
@Slayerr.
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Infamous 1
@Slayerr.
Yooo
Im battling a fucking zombie, I already Off'd this Sped
The fact I 'Handed out your 'Grave once,means your the 'Walking Dead.
This faker insists he gets pussy n brings the drugs, but aint popped a pill thus far
Only time his night consists of Es and G-strings he’s round a campfire playing Kumbaya
Props to Both but infamous bars had a personal edge which made the punch feel like it connected more. Slayer wasn't bad here but the dismissive aura of the way Infamous bragged about beating him before brought its own level of disrespect. MVGT Infamous 1
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My first vote in some time so this'll throw some of you off: Please note it's based purely upon inference and reading this battle and this battle alone with no prior knowledge of any interactions.
It seems Famous played upon prior interactions so it was a bit personal. However, Reviver went for the comedic route and... well, that second line had me laughing. It's hard to come back from being inferred that you sing "koombiyah".
Vote- Reviver.
Infamous was cool but it was a bit simple to me compared to his last drops. Cool concept but nothing mind blowing.
Slayer, really liking it. Funny shit and great connections. Well done.
V/ slayer.
"Handed out your grave" is kinda mehhh from both ways of looking at it. If echelon wrote this I'd say big improvement but since its you I'd say its lackluster.
Slayerr. you had a simple yet comedic and effective punch imo. Gotta smirk outta me.
v/ slayer
To me, "handing out ur grave" is very much similar to "total this fag" from last week, in that it isn't an action that occurs regularly enough for it to be the central tie-in to the punch. It just sounds, I don't know, as if you were trying your best to execute the punch and failed short due to poor word choice. While I wasn't really that much invested in Slayer's bar, I will say that he stuck with the theme from beginning to end, with proper build and payoff. It was constructed much better as well, but I have to say it was a bit wordy. Perhaps you could of condensed your entire concept to make it more fluid and easier to read, because when I read this aloud it fills like it takes longer to get through than a typical bar.
vote Slayer
v/Slayerr
i dont think hand out the grave was bad but it did feel off. maybe it was the "I" handed~idk. i understood what you meant but it wasn't for me. slayerr had a funny bar here it ticked all of the boxes.
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Inf- handed out the grave is a decent concept but it would've been more impactful if you made it "hand" instead. Slay- i liked the humor in your bar although it was a bit wordy for my taste- i think u did enough for the W. v/Slayer
Man Slayer ..!!! your best yet ...Inf just didnt connect well to me.. i was feeling the imagery by Slayer
vote Slayer
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