@Diso bar due Thursday I’ll edit the rules in later
@Diso bar due Thursday I’ll edit the rules in later
@Kill Spree @Diso let’s get those verses in boys
all know ya girl, not just me it's all them guys
We all circle around ya queen, like the family did with Elizabeth's demise
Faggot…
I put the rock to your head & really numb this guy
Won’t know I put the Hawkin ur mouth when you hear the drum n die
Diso punch was pretty fire lol I just hate the word demise but it’s all good.
Spree yours was decent but didn’t hit as hard as Diso
Vote Diso
Kill
Diso had the current event freshness but didnt do enough.
Kill had poor wording but the hawkins wp wins here
Plottin your demise.
Diso's set up created the framework for the punch to work, wording was a bit unusual but it gave direction nonetheless. Not a bad idea with the circle round your queen concept. I think it just needed some more work on the wordplay aspect. The way you pieced it together was good though, you showed where it was going and left the reveal til the end.
Thought Kill Spree was a lot more coherent & the set up linked with the punch really well. Rock to his head / numb this guy relating to the coke OD was nicely done. I didn't catch this the first time as I couldn't think who Hawkin was. The punch was decent, I actually thought the set up was more intricate than the punch but either way it was still enough to be victorious.
Vote Kill Spree
diso's concept was pretty good.. its fresh.. but idk the wording / execution is off, it doesn't really hit for me. it could have been executed better. We have kill on the other hand with a pretty direct punch that landed and hit, not amazing but I'm leaning more for it.
v.kill
v/Kill
that Queen Elizabeth punch was straight off the presses lol. overall wording. Kill concept and execution was stronger here
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Vote spree
First guy could’ve worded better
Spree edges it..
More original, worded a bit better
Other gut could've done the current event better imo..
V spree
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