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    Reject(s) - Lowlifes (Saint C x The 4N1)

    Hey everyone back with some new material. Been putting in work these past few months and its starting to show in the local scene. Always looking for feedback though and I know some of you guys have great advice so here's two of our most recent songs. Dont hold back

    Reject(s)
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    Re: Reject(s) - Lowlifes (Saint C x The 4N1)

    The beat starts off sounding like some Michael Jackson "just beat it" shit.. not feeling it. wasn't feelin the first artist or the hook.. man all I can think of is Mj right now.. 2nd dude was way better. flow starts off decent but you get a lil sloppy n fall off soon after but u had the better voice.. only thing that was ok about this.. just being real yall..keep striving tho.

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    Re: Reject(s) - Lowlifes (Saint C x The 4N1)

    I listened to the first verse of each... recognize your style. I think sometimes you should go back and touch up parts where you're slightly off tryna catch your breath. Be conscious of your presentation, you can either be remembered for two things, your flaws or your strengths, especially if people don't have much else they like about tracks.

    That said, you're tracks always have some epic sounding beats and you rapping fast, I would like to hear you switch it up sometime and get out of your element, change the type of beat, rap a different way. Don't bore me dawg

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