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    Sooooooooooo...yeah...

    Burial of Niccolo
    by Professor Frost


    We're in this cemetery, so I'll dump dirt in ya name
    I killed you, went to your funeral...
    ..and my shirt was the same
    Still had the blood of The Prince on it & enclosed in my hand
    You're all talk just like Winston, without the most enlightened of speeches
    Quote Originally Posted by Winston Churchill in 1940
    We Shall Fight Them On The Beaches
    Meanwhile, you got ya mutha fuckin' toes in the sand
    You stay lurking on RB, get your weight up with a quick buck
    ...By the way I heard Dagel might need to get his dick sucked

    Talk soft shit, & I'll have your cartilage missin'
    Relaying bars so fast, you gotta crawl to my prison
    Walls hella tinted. Haters fall for the sentence
    I free throw lines like it's nothing...I still ball for the critics
    You're a fake ass poet, a bitch-made aristocrat
    Wanna hear an ironic question?
    Niccolo asking somebody, "where the bitches at?

    Some of these old RB writers excuse, & bitch
    Same old playwrights confused, they need a newer script
    Time to cut the nonsense out, exposed, into a ditch
    Could close ya eyes still reciting what I wrote, man it's too legit
    You like Politics, fuck boy?
    Well, The Senate comes with goons equipped
    No rules exist when I start rapping about tools that bitch

    Can't front & believe that think you can fuck with me
    Nigga, I'll hold you spine & get to snappin' like shutter speed #cold
    You're RB's favorite roach & I'm not talkin' ashin' blunts
    I bet if I put 1k on us fighting irl, you'd prolly take the cash and run
    I hope you trip down the steps to your death. so, before your casket shut
    I can dump my piss down your Fresh tuxedo, elegantly, -- from a plastic cup
    When I go to court for it, I'll laugh it up...............
    Real. Slow. -- Then I'll smack the judge

    & thus concludes the roast of Niccolo Machiavelli
    Take this bomb of a verse & have it strapped to ya belly
    Can't keep up with the future, I'm too fast & you're steady
    Fuck your phony trash NS drops, nigga, I rap when I'm ready
    Moonwalking in steel toed boots, spittin' metal lyrics at Mach-5 speed
    Each bar melts as I speak, cause my breathe can adopt the heat
    I can conjure 1,000 disses in one night, it's not hard to stop the weak
    I picture me whooping your ass like Chris Brown on a track
    With each pound, I attract, cause I know how to crop the beat #multiwordplay #omg
    This nigga feelin' himself, he thinks his avi is cool cause it's half in black
    And he goes by Niccolo so he can say he 'packs a Mach'
    -- Fuck it lmfao

    wait...
    waiit...
    UHHH...I got more

    This nigga is Machiavelli? He must think he's 2-Pac
    Wasted Time on your dumb ass, now I need a new watch
    I gotta get the switchblade, boot to it your ribcage
    Now with a 6-Guage I'll shoot it & get your wig shaved
    Real life Professor, I'm here to teach you a lesson
    You talkin' bout 'HOFs'? You tryna preach to a reverend
    Since we're gonna go bragging about internet shit...
    (btw, it's sad that this is your life. this is as good as it gets)
    You ain't no better than The Goodness, Plexus, Dagel or Brandon
    I wrote topicals for the SS league for 3 months, then I ran 1
    I could go & champ this shit out of random
    But I'll let scum like you that need it the most go have 1
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    Re: The Cemetery - Niccolo

    whats with the beef bro? lol

    letting off some steam eh
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    Re: The Cemetery - Niccolo

    ANGER in words dude well put together, but y the hatred

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    Re: The Cemetery - Niccolo

    Call me crazy but I actually loved this shit my dude. This is actually what Open mic has been missing a little competition. It's eneretaining to see two be go at it almost like in hip hop how we all get hype when say Jay Z dissed Nas. So I commend you for starting some drama here in open mic lol. As far as your bars they were decent I can see why your battle record is what it is lol. Some of your personals lacked substance. Your flow was on point all the way thru. You should of used more Machiavelli references, it send a more direct punch along with the name flip is priceless lol. That fucking picture at the end ctfuuuuu made this shit funny as fuck good add. Now if I get bored later YOU WILL get a response.

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    Re: The Cemetery - Niccolo

    Quote Originally Posted by Nicasso View Post
    Call me crazy but I actually loved this shit my dude. This is actually what Open mic has been missing a little competition. It's eneretaining to see two be go at it almost like in hip hop how we all get hype when say Jay Z dissed Nas. So I commend you for starting some drama here in open mic lol. As far as your bars they were decent I can see why your battle record is what it is lol. Some of your personals lacked substance. Your flow was on point all the way thru. You should of used more Machiavelli references, it send a more direct punch along with the name flip is priceless lol. That fucking picture at the end ctfuuuuu made this shit funny as fuck good add. Now if I get bored later YOU WILL get a response.
    Exactly.
    You get it, you get it. Good job.

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    Re: The Cemetery - Niccolo

    Pretty nice. Had to read this w/ a different accent too. This was pretty good though, alittle bit of it threw me off at some points but liked the flow and the content. Good topic.

    Liked this

    You're RB's favorite roach & I'm not talkin' ashin' blunts
    I bet if I put 1k on us fighting irl, you'd prolly take the cash and run
    I hope you trip down the steps to your death. so, before your casket shut
    I can dump my piss down your Fresh tuxedo, elegantly, -- from a plastic cup
    When I go to court for it, I'll laugh it up...............
    Real. Slow. -- Then I'll smack the judge

    Lol real sick. Nice work. Stay up.
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    Re: The Cemetery - Niccolo

    Quote Originally Posted by Boy Bourne View Post
    Pretty nice. Had to read this w/ a different accent too. This was pretty good though, alittle bit of it threw me off at some points but liked the flow and the content. Good topic.

    Liked this

    You're RB's favorite roach & I'm not talkin' ashin' blunts
    I bet if I put 1k on us fighting irl, you'd prolly take the cash and run
    I hope you trip down the steps to your death. so, before your casket shut
    I can dump my piss down your Fresh tuxedo, elegantly, -- from a plastic cup
    When I go to court for it, I'll laugh it up...............
    Real. Slow. -- Then I'll smack the judge

    Lol real sick. Nice work. Stay up.
    Lmao, that's one of my favorite parts too.

    Thanks for the read my dude.

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    Re: The Cemetery - Niccolo

    "We're in this cemetery, so I'll dump dirt in ya name
    I killed you, went to your funeral...
    ..and my shirt was the same..."

    "You like Politics, fuck boy?
    Well, The Senate comes with goons equipped
    No rules exist when I start rapping about tools that bitch.."

    "I hope you trip down the steps to your death. so, before your casket shut
    I can dump my piss down your Fresh tuxedo, elegantly, -- from a plastic cup
    When I go to court for it, I'll laugh it up...............
    Real. Slow. -- Then I'll smack the judge..."

    "& thus concludes the roast of Niccolo Machiavelli
    Take this bomb of a verse & have it strapped to ya belly
    Can't keep up with the future, I'm too fast & you're steady
    Fuck your phony trash NS drops, nigga, I rap when I'm ready.." ----------Love this line.

    "..wait...
    waiit...
    UHHH...I got more..." --------LOL


    ^^^^^^ Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens ^^^^^ These are a few of my favourite things.

    Those bars made me crack up. I thought they were great. I loved the flow and the rhymes. I loved the attitude.

    I think your flow toppled a few times. I felt there were too many words here and there at times.
    Sometimes you didn't rhyme the way I expected. But you conveyed the attitude.
    I wasn't big on some of the hash tags.

    Still, it was a fun read.

    I think Nicasso took it really well. He's a good sport for knowing not to take it personally.

    You do 'nasty' well Professor Frost.

    Keep a lil mean streak now and then.

    It suits you.


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    Re: The Cemetery - Niccolo

    Quote Originally Posted by Emilyinthepool View Post
    "We're in this cemetery, so I'll dump dirt in ya name
    I killed you, went to your funeral...
    ..and my shirt was the same..."

    "You like Politics, fuck boy?
    Well, The Senate comes with goons equipped
    No rules exist when I start rapping about tools that bitch.."

    "I hope you trip down the steps to your death. so, before your casket shut
    I can dump my piss down your Fresh tuxedo, elegantly, -- from a plastic cup
    When I go to court for it, I'll laugh it up...............
    Real. Slow. -- Then I'll smack the judge..."

    "& thus concludes the roast of Niccolo Machiavelli
    Take this bomb of a verse & have it strapped to ya belly
    Can't keep up with the future, I'm too fast & you're steady
    Fuck your phony trash NS drops, nigga, I rap when I'm ready.." ----------Love this line.

    "..wait...
    waiit...
    UHHH...I got more..." --------LOL


    ^^^^^^ Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens ^^^^^ These are a few of my favourite things.

    Those bars made me crack up. I thought they were great. I loved the flow and the rhymes. I loved the attitude.

    I think your flow toppled a few times. I felt there were too many words here and there at times.
    Sometimes you didn't rhyme the way I expected. But you conveyed the attitude.
    I wasn't big on some of the hash tags.

    Still, it was a fun read.

    I think Nicasso took it really well. He's a good sport for knowing not to take it personally.

    You do 'nasty' well Professor Frost.

    Keep a lil mean streak now and then.

    It suits you.

    Thank you for the read & review
    xxx

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