Last edited by Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere; December 23rd, 2013 at 03:05 PM
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Here. 10
10 bars
End aka blacksilence aka hasnt been here since 2007
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drag your corpse thru traffic for hours.. no one will find this man
when i locate a deserted ditch, n cover those tracks like a tribute band
im not into shootin people in the back, so i'll wait for the right moment, then...
sneak up behind you w/ the nine..n the second u-turn..your DEAD, END!!
this broke lame claims he's sponsored w/ pants,shirts, ect... stop lying, YOU SUCK!
if he's rapping for-clothes, thats the next thing the banks gonna seize from this poor fuck
end's girl goes partying w/o him..right away i seen what his whore was about
met his bitch on spring break, after i fucked her so hard the bed gave out
you've been gone along time..n nowadays us textcee's show no mercy..
after this end will wish he retired in 07 like Bob Waterfield did his jersey
mir sleep the shit out you..he'll get knocked out cold on the floor.
i'll put such a beating on black tomoorow the NAACP will be at my door
your worthless to me n everyone else. ya rhymes are toliet water, im not messing..
so i'll piss on this lame until silence is golden n literally becomes that expression
go ahead dig for personals..u wont find shit except for me fucking w/ the shotty
but i got alot on you, like the place i'll pave w/ cement for parking above your body
i'll body this faggot quickly cuz he's lame..punches w/ give your neck a jerk..
this dudes such a scrub, when i lay him out, nurses will try to were him to work
people dont read your weak rhymes, it's a fact his bars aren't worthy
when it comes to feedback more people leave black hanging then the south in 1930
20? Pls busy out doin shit u cant lls
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Ya resumes weak, in school u couldn't reach the quota
Show em the Alphabet 2 success n its a No Show like his high schoo diploma
Some1 give em a soda, ya wack with dried up lines
The only Miracle LLL was lookin for, was u NOT signing back in another time
He whined n cried 2 Spit like pls what ever u want im with
But a I swear 2.. scouts honor, 2 send this fag right off a fucking cliff
Ya try 2 cling 2 any vet like who next, I know u was devastated when Spit left
Told em 2 walk with God, n the fag showed up on GOW dorm room steps
Got this bitch seeing black, ur shit 2 the core
2 see the light u gotta hit Switch, n we ALL know what happened in week 4
I be rockin that Ralph, the bitchs scream from the logo
N I guess mir got the same effect 2, since bitchs scream ur Polo
& ur bitch go 4 team figured u should know g
Everyones poundcake her ass, bitch was the hoods SaraLee
She on the line, I got no time, bitch be buggin me
Mir baby wipes great, bitch got stock in huggies
No chance buddy, 2 4 1 special 1-2 now LLL he in fearOriginally Posted by Barcotic
Cuz after every mir drop it reads, played, played, played n reword here
* would had more quotes but didnt know how 2 quote ppl in closed battles* lol high as shit
Last edited by Lawd; December 28th, 2013 at 10:39 PM
drag your corpse thru traffic for hours.. no one will find this man
when i locate a deserted ditch, n cover those tracks like a tribute band
wow tight metaphorical comparison hard hit direct
im not into shootin people in the back, so i'll wait for the right moment, then...
sneak up behind you w/ the nine..n the second u-turn..your DEAD, END!!
this was cool n direct but the nameplay been used before pretty predictable
this broke lame claims he's sponsored w/ pants,shirts, ect... stop lying, YOU SUCK!
if he's rapping for-clothes, thats the next thing the banks gonna seize from this poor fuck
kinda forced wordplay the attempt was cool though
end's girl goes partying w/o him..right away i seen what his whore was about
met his bitch on spring break, after i fucked her so hard the bed gave out
seen this before but gives me a laugh everytime although man its played as fuck
you've been gone along time..n nowadays us textcee's show no mercy..
after this end will wish he retired in 07 like Bob Waterfield did his jersey
ok
mir sleep the shit out you..he'll get knocked out cold on the floor.
i'll put such a beating on black tomoorow the NAACP will be at my door
oh shit lmao
your worthless to me n everyone else. ya rhymes are toliet water, im not messing..
so i'll piss on this lame until silence is golden n literally becomes that expression
haha nice creative flip
go ahead dig for personals..u wont find shit except for me fucking w/ the shotty
but i got alot on you, like the place i'll pave w/ cement for parking above your body
ok direct hit
i'll body this faggot quickly cuz he's lame..punches w/ give your neck a jerk..
this dudes such a scrub, when i lay him out, nurses will try to were him to work
haha good wordplay reference again nice flip creative hit
people dont read your weak rhymes, it's a fact his bars aren't worthy
when it comes to feedback more people leave black hanging then the south in 1930
good nameplay reference
Lawd
Ya resumes weak, in school u couldn't reach the quota
Show em the Alphabet 2 success n its a No Show like his high schoo diploma
lol nice personal
Some1 give em a soda, ya wack with dried up lines
The only Miracle LLL was lookin for, was u NOT signing back in another time
mild personal hit
He whined n cried 2 Spit like pls what ever u want im with
But a I swear 2.. scouts honor, 2 send this fag right off a fucking cliff
ok personal but wording in finisher could've been polished better
Ya try 2 cling 2 any vet like who next, I know u was devastated when Spit left
Told em 2 walk with God, n the fag showed up on GOW dorm room steps
lmao
Got this bitch seeing black, ur shit 2 the core
2 see the light u gotta hit Switch, n we ALL know what happened in week 4
nice personal
I be rockin that Ralph, the bitchs scream from the logo
N I guess mir got the same effect 2, since bitchs scream ur Polo
wasn't feeling the wordplay here
& ur bitch go 4 team figured u should know g
Everyones poundcake her ass, bitch was the hoods SaraLee
lmao
She on the line, I got no time, bitch be buggin me
Mir baby wipes great, bitch got stock in huggies
lol nice wp flip
No chance buddy, 2 4 1 special 1-2 now LLL he in fear
Cuz after every mir drop it reads, played, played, played n reword here
lmao
This battle was entertaining as fuck personals vs direct hits and creativity. Mir Opener was fresh as fuck tight metaphore. dead end was played as well as spring break and for close was forced kinda hurt ya there.
NAACP line was pretty funny. silence is golden line was pretty creative. scrub line and closer was cool also. Lawd good personal on opener. walk with God line lmao. Hit the light switch line personal was cool. poundcake and baby wipe line was lol.
Well I gotta give to lawd for personal shots. miracle I felt was more creative he had some good flips nice direct hits and I felt he was just more consistent here.
V/miracle
miracle
drag your corpse thru traffic for hours.. no one will find this man
when i locate a deserted ditch, n cover those tracks like a tribute band
jab was there 1/3
im not into shootin people in the back, so i'll wait for the right moment, then...
sneak up behind you w/ the nine..n the second u-turn..your DEAD, END!!
a lil better 1.5/3
this broke lame claims he's sponsored w/ pants,shirts, ect... stop lying, YOU SUCK!
if he's rapping for-clothes, thats the next thing the banks gonna seize from this poor fuck
solid 2/3
end's girl goes partying w/o him..right away i seen what his whore was about
met his bitch on spring break, after i fucked her so hard the bed gave out
.5/3
you've been gone along time..n nowadays us textcee's show no mercy..
after this end will wish he retired in 07 like Bob Waterfield did his jersey
ehhh .5/3
mir sleep the shit out you..he'll get knocked out cold on the floor.
i'll put such a beating on black tomoorow the NAACP will be at my door
jab .5/3
your worthless to me n everyone else. ya rhymes are toliet water, im not messing..
so i'll piss on this lame until silence is golden n literally becomes that expression
soilid hit 2/3 funny too
go ahead dig for personals..u wont find shit except for me fucking w/ the shotty
but i got alot on you, like the place i'll pave w/ cement for parking above your body
nice punch 2/3
i'll body this faggot quickly cuz he's lame..punches w/ give your neck a jerk..
this dudes such a scrub, when i lay him out, nurses will try to were him to work
wording was weird here wasnt feeling it .5/3
people dont read your weak rhymes, it's a fact his bars aren't worthy
when it comes to feedback more people leave black hanging then the south in 1930
black concept again?u say black alot son .5/3 weak closer no hate..
11/30
Lawd
Re: wk 5: Lawd aka end(0-0) vs Miracle(0-2) WAITING FOR MIRACLE RESPONSE
20? Pls busy out doin shit u cant lls
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Ya resumes weak, in school u couldn't reach the quota
Show em the Alphabet 2 success n its a No Show like his high schoo diploma
nice opener 1.5/3
Some1 give em a soda, ya wack with dried up lines
The only Miracle LLL was lookin for, was u NOT signing back in another time
i enjoyed htis line, personally 2/3
He whined n cried 2 Spit like pls what ever u want im with
But a I swear 2.. scouts honor, 2 send this fag right off a fucking cliff
statement here .5/3
Ya try 2 cling 2 any vet like who next, I know u was devastated when Spit left
Told em 2 walk with God, n the fag showed up on GOW dorm room steps
statement here but it made me laugh 1/3
Got this bitch seeing black, ur shit 2 the core
2 see the light u gotta hit Switch, n we ALL know what happened in week 4
another jab 1/3
I be rockin that Ralph, the bitchs scream from the logo
N I guess mir got the same effect 2, since bitchs scream ur Polo
.5/e ehh
& ur bitch go 4 team figured u should know g
Everyones poundcake her ass, bitch was the hoods SaraLee
.5/3
She on the line, I got no time, bitch be buggin me
Mir baby wipes great, bitch got stock in huggies
0/3 wack line b haha no hate
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Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
seen way too many bag a bitch flips done already
Lawd coulda worded his shit a bit better but he had the fresh edge
v/Lawd
No chance buddy, 2 4 1 special 1-2 now LLL he in fear
Cuz after every mir drop it reads, played, played, played n reword here
terribly closer worded badly
.5/3
7.5/30
V/miracle
i thought lawed could of took it int he beginning but startesd saying boozy shit that didnt make sense that much. no offense...miracle takes this, just by a bit though.
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Last edited by Lawd; December 29th, 2013 at 05:44 PM
Rapping for clothes, alot on u, golden, closer
Vs
Switch, closer
V/miracle, cool battle both had some cool shit. End had alot of
Ideas that Coulda.been dope if worded different like the Gow line
Wouldaa been nice. I think mir was more consistent here also
He had the lounge wit the golden jawn...nice flip ..prrops yahll
Name plays on me are old.
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