W4: FoulMonoply (1-0) vs Phalanx (1-1) PHALANX WINS

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LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 4

10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.

Good luck @FoulMonoply @Phalanx

[Phalanx]

Ten lines. Check.

[Foul]

check

[Foul]

I'ma legend MC. bitches suck my dick as soon as i get in the leauge , u already a feen
We haven't seen chicks beggin for p since the last time R Kelly was seen
prolly thought the don was james bond.cuz i tend to fit mad clips into MY 9s
but if PH ever even flipped a quarter.its prolly the fat nigga from GRIND TIME!
I wouldn't let you in my cameo sucker, nigga like half ya jokes suffer
haven't seen a fal cunt punch since playing as him in super smash brothers
you a clown emcee! i'm astounding see his first battle ended up bein real ridiculous
i didn't laugh, cuz that nigga rids job to rub on this playas balls like sports female physicists
I'm not racist but Saddam was a faggot. its not even tragic, that ur in the mosque with ur grand kids
ur lines were double long as ala's, fagot u might as well re-write the quaran while ur at it

[Phalanx]

Mentally, Im cocky..see I'm way too cold for this gentle dweeb to stop me..
So when I roll up with blades, you'll see Foul on ice like penalties in hockey...
"Ooooh!" <- That was the crowds reaction...And when I apply it to your name..
Then we'll see my dog with the iron on monopOly like I was designing the board game...
You've won ONE battle and you think you're perceived as a threat?!
Just because you passed Professor doesnt mean you've earned a degree of respect.
This L? You're gonna take it laying down like the position of a lazy hoe...
Every thing FM puts out is played...so we dont listen to the radio..
Check my hype...Everyones been getting ripped by this new guy..
And with those toilet paper scripts you pack..Ill shit on you too, Ply..

[Jermz $G$]

I'ma legend MC. bitches suck my dick as soon as i get in the leauge , u already a feen
We haven't seen chicks beggin for p since the last time R Kelly was seen

vs

Mentally, Im cocky..see I'm way too cold for this gentle dweeb to stop me..
So when I roll up with blades, you'll see Foul on ice like penalties in hockey...
You've won ONE battle and you think you're perceived as a threat?!
Just because you passed Professor doesnt mean you've earned a degree of respect.
This L? You're gonna take it laying down like the position of a lazy hoe...
Every thing FM puts out is played...so we dont listen to the radio..

decent battle basicly to me seemed like a bunch of nameplays thrown at eachother but to me phalanx bars werent as forced and more funny not much from fouls verse really stood out to much to me

v/ phalanx

[Switch.]

I'ma legend MC. bitches suck my dick as soon as i get in the leauge , u already a feen
We haven't seen chicks beggin for p since the last time R Kelly was seen
prolly thought the don was james bond.cuz i tend to fit mad clips into MY 9s
but if PH ever even flipped a quarter.its prolly the fat nigga from GRIND TIME!

Vs

Mentally, Im cocky..see I'm way too cold for this gentle dweeb to stop me..
So when I roll up with blades, you'll see Foul on ice like penalties in hockey...
You've won ONE battle and you think you're perceived as a threat?!
Just because you passed Professor doesnt mean you've earned a degree of respect.
This L? You're gonna take it laying down like the position of a lazy hoe...
Every thing FM puts out is played...so we dont listen to the radio..

Not a bad battle but phal takes this with the overall better quotable and verse. Apart from fm quotes the rest of the verse was very weak compared to phals. Phials personals were pretty cool and clever. FM if you brush up on wording and execution your verses will be more impactful but keep at it.

V/phal.

[Salamander]

FM's closer was DOPE, unfortunately the setup sucked. Other than that, he didn't have much. The abbreviated nameplays weren't very effective at all IMO.

Phal had foul on ice and degree of respect, which were both cool. Iron on Monopoly was a really nice concept, but used wrong/corny with the whole "oh"/adding the letter crap. Decent little verse. Not your best so far, but you did enough here.

V. Phalanx

[OG Maestro]

Damn Monopoly. You barely lost this. And damn Phal. You BARELY won.

Monopoly: You had good concepts for the first half of your bars, then you lost direction. That's when I lost interest.

Phalanx: You had nice wordplay but your lines were drier than grandma pussy. Nothing was really a big punch or nothing. Decent. Step yo game up. You a bitch too for that Professor bar. nahhh jk idc

Vote: Phalanx

[Joe Boston]

FM

I'ma legend MC. bitches suck my dick as soon as i get in the leauge , u already a feen
We haven't seen chicks beggin for p since the last time R Kelly was seen
played hit played nameplay

prolly thought the don was james bond.cuz i tend to fit mad clips into MY 9s
but if PH ever even flipped a quarter.its prolly the fat nigga from GRIND TIME!
ok cool concept

I wouldn't let you in my cameo sucker, nigga like half ya jokes suffer
haven't seen a fal cunt punch since playing as him in super smash brothers
nah

you a clown emcee! i'm astounding see his first battle ended up bein real ridiculous
i didn't laugh, cuz that nigga rids job to rub on this playas balls like sports female physicists
could've been worded better

I'm not racist but Saddam was a faggot. its not even tragic, that ur in the mosque with ur grand kids
ur lines were double long as ala's, fagot u might as well re-write the quaran while ur at it
nah wording horrible on finisher here

Phal

Mentally, Im cocky..see I'm way too cold for this gentle dweeb to stop me..
So when I roll up with blades, you'll see Foul on ice like penalties in hockey...
not a bad nameplay hit I don't wanna be technical but fouls aint in hockey still decent concept wise though

"Ooooh!" <- That was the crowds reaction...And when I apply it to your name..
Then we'll see my dog with the iron on monopOly like I was designing the board game...
ive this nameplay a lot but the flip was pretty dope cuz incoeperated the iron piece from the game and flipped it into a wordplay not bad according to the flip


You've won ONE battle and you think you're perceived as a threat?!
Just because you passed Professor doesnt mean you've earned a degree of respect.
lol nice personal

This L? You're gonna take it laying down like the position of a lazy hoe...
Every thing FM puts out is played...so we dont listen to the radio..
lol

Check my hype...Everyones been getting ripped by this new guy..
And with those toilet paper scripts you pack..Ill shit on you too, Ply..
nah played

well FM u had the PH hit and really nothing else man. Phal more creative good nameplay hits.

V/Phal

[King]

nothing

vs

Mentally, Im cocky..see I'm way too cold for this gentle dweeb to stop me..
So when I roll up with blades, you'll see Foul on ice like penalties in hockey...
You've won ONE battle and you think you're perceived as a threat?!
Just because you passed Professor doesnt mean you've earned a degree of respect.

monopoly u didn't really connect with anything. wording killed most of ur verse. u should bang out a few battles in front lines to get a feel for what kind of writing is gonna connect. gotta be more clever. phal started with some hits, board games had potential i just hated the shit out of ur set up, last two bars fell off. just no impact.

vote phal.

[Allen Knight]

Mentally, Im cocky..see I'm way too cold for this gentle dweeb to stop me..
So when I roll up with blades, you'll see Foul on ice like penalties in hockey.
You've won ONE battle and you think you're perceived as a threat?!
Just because you passed Professor doesnt mean you've earned a degree of respect.

Vs

I'm not racist but Saddam was a faggot. its not even tragic, that ur in the mosque with ur grand kids ur lines were double long as ala's, fagot u might as well re-write the quaran while ur at it

V/phal, decent battle. Foul had some goos concepts but wording killed them
the closer.Coulda been nice as fuck if worded different. Phal had a decent verse
couple of cool bars he took this pretty easy. Foul read some old battles an ull
Get the wording down but Props to both.