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Last edited by Pipeman237; December 28th, 2011 at 09:54 PM
Bump!
Not really diggin' the hook. It gets kind of annoyin' tbh lol. First verse is pretty bland. Nothin' really catches my attention. Generic rappin'. It's on beat. But now work on a flow that's catchy if you know what I mean. 2nd verse catches my ear more. But the delivery of it isn't the best. But that's his voice. I'm just not a fan of it. Yea I don't like this hook lol. I think it's pretty cheesy. Like you tried to be catchy so decided to just go simple to where it was easy to say along with.
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srry bout your homie passing...
As for the track...the beat is wack.
The hook is amateurish.
1st flow reminds me of 1980s Run DMC...not bad...but not fitting for this beat.
2nd...a little complexity in the actual flow...but the topic, lyrics, and point of this track are all beyond me
potential...but I'd say stick with the basics and build from there..."throw your throw your hands up"...ugh...NO.
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Was going to hit you back but it's obviously been edited.
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