In England...

[Endeva.]

Sittin’ spitting in Britain
Wi’ written scribbles I’m scripting…
Depicting, drifting, existing,
Through the mist of Newbiggin,
Chillin…Living as villains,
Wi’ parents drilling ambition
Quizzing, insisting that I listen...
Time till prison is ticking
But…
Tongue whippin’ a victim, constricting an’ gripping
Increases resistance, there’s no wisdom in bitchin’…
An’ persisting to dig in, you’re not twisting my wrist’s n’
And I’m not singin my sins n’ sinking
Inquisitions are ringing, wi ’the criminal’s winning
Quit reminiscing…
Start admitting that decisions…
To discipline with fists an’ a kicking is…
Forbidden in fiction, never mind living children
The damn system is sinking,…
So I’m still drinking n’ binging
And…
…Still grinning n’ winking at women
I show no guilt as I’m jilting
Within a blink of an instant I’m back chillin’…
…In England my kingdom.






http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...977/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...639/index.html

[Kid Craze]

This was crazy good, I love the insane multis threw out, no loose ones or ones that seemed out of place or uneeded. Next was the crazy flow, not sure if you had this in mind for spoken or audio, but i could flow this spoken although i was tongue tiedonce or twice it still flowed and would really go sick with a beat behind it. I also like the topic/story it was both interesting as well as mysterious as you didnt explain too much. I'd really like to see this expanded and recorded juss to hear how crazy itd sound, i really like this mah dude, Good work!

[Tool]

I fuck with some of this.

[Extinctor Draconis]

links, dev

I know you're good for it though

[Extinctor Draconis]

links, dev

I know you're good for it though

[N.F.M.]

It wasn't a bad rap. I've never been to England so I don't know what British rap really sounds like. But from the way you worded this verse it seems you got some talent so I'll just give you props on that and let you go about doin your thang. Good luck with your lyrics and keep postin. ^_^

[Endeva.]

thanks peeps...

oh and ill get them other links up shortly

[The Dead]

This was really good from a flow and rhyming standpoint. As far as recording and actual spitting is concerned, it needs a little bit of polish. It really seems to me that you are actually a very good rapper that needs to come out of his shell. You could also benifit from spitting a little more on topic, choosing something to talk about rather than "just spitting" as what I can gather is going on here. Aside from that, the talent is definetly there.

[Endeva.]

thanks... ive already got it down on audio, fits smooth as fuck... when you say about the topic, if you look at most of my work on here, its all about the topic, this was just about the rhyming really

[wickedwordpLay]

This was nice no doubt,
Loved the multis and the flow
not many here (from what i've seen) can do that.
I can imagine you rippin this up. Keep it up fam



peep my shit
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[Soule]

This was fun to read. Nothing technically 'dope' about it. The rhyme scheme was easy and enjoyable. Wording was, rather British, which is the point lol. Sounded interesting for me to read this with my Irish accent when it's a British man's writing. lol. The concept was fun, obviously not too serious. Maybe more of a freestyle by chance? Eitherway, I miss our collabs old friend. Keep it up. Entertaining read.

[Lil. D]

I really want to see an audio version of this, multis and flow was great. Reminded me of a tongue twister that I used to say when I was younger.

[Means]

this was incredibly dope, flow was on point and the multis where used really well. Def agree with the user above me, would like to see this in audio.

edit, saw you said this was in audio, send me the link to that jo!

[Tr!gga]

Fuck.. I didn't think it was going to b too good when I saw the short lines and similarly spelled words but u fucked it up.. Shit was fuckin ridiculous how u made good shit out of only a few syllables. Good fuckin shit b