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Last edited by KnowP; March 3rd, 2011 at 05:24 PM
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this fag couldnt get in my crew, so he went and made one up
to compete, TNT will need a Miracle.............not to be gay as fuc
ya match against marv was a drugging, and he beat you sober
funny how you was callin him faggot....but he left YOU bendin over
read ya OM. you cant be serious, you must be sick in the head
u had me thinkin Bible cuz after seein the Pyramid it felt like I had the plague
that probably went over your head like your mom, the cock enforcer
i mean those lips stay soo juicy and drippin that Carmex tries to endorce her
which goes to show why you suck, u get no props or thanks
but ya records coo cuz ya been on killin spree...battlin no one in the ranks
yo man sorry i cant post till saturday night..had to work late now im dead tired..sorry man
i hope u can wait, if not sorry homie
one on one? please....
if this were a boxing match..i swear i'd KO this fool
people be waiting on the bell to ring early, like half days in school..
n with guns im visious..i'll load it up n send you to hell
cuz my bullets like knights in chess...watch them move in L..
on my level? lmao...grab a ladder cuz you'll need that
cant you see that; im above leg, ya'll should call me knee cap..
KP getting vet status? pleasee, he wouldnt see that in a kettle
so he changed his name to legendary
.............................cuz he knows he'll never see that medal..
in ur crew ur the low man...responsible? there not giving ya
cd puts less pressure on leg ---------->then a broken fibula..
Im allowed to vote cuz im in both yalls crews
KnowP
this fag couldnt get in my crew, so he went and made one up
to compete, TNT will need a Miracle.............not to be gay as fuc
Def a good opener
ya match against marv was a drugging, and he beat you sober
funny how you was callin him faggot....but he left YOU bendin over
Yep, im feelin this
read ya OM. you cant be serious, you must be sick in the head
u had me thinkin Bible cuz after seein the Pyramid it felt like I had the plague
I feel like this is good, but i just dont understand it somehow
that probably went over your head like your mom, the cock enforcer
i mean those lips stay soo juicy and drippin that Carmex tries to endorce her
Lol......good personal
which goes to show why you suck, u get no props or thanks
but ya records coo cuz ya been on killin spree...battlin no one in the ranks
Decent
Miracle
one on one? please....
if this were a boxing match..i swear i'd KO this fool
people be waiting on the bell to ring early, like half days in school..
Not bad...its creative
n with guns im visious..i'll load it up n send you to hell
cuz my bullets like knights in chess...watch them move in L..
Sick....Def feelin this
on my level? lmao...grab a ladder cuz you'll need that
cant you see that; im above leg, ya'll should call me knee cap..
Took me a second to get it....but nice concept
KP getting vet status? pleasee, he wouldnt see that in a kettle
so he changed his name to legendary
.............................cuz he knows he'll never see that medal..
Good personal.
in ur crew ur the low man...responsible? there not giving ya
cd puts less pressure on leg ---------->then a broken fibula..
Lol good nameplay...idk whether it seems forced..........or just real creative
Overall:
Nameplays = Miracle
Personals = Legendary
Creativity = Miracle
Quotables = Legendary
Humor = tie
Lol, this was close as fuck imo........the only thing i can say is that Legendarys concepts were a little bit more played......and while miracles were kinda whacky....they was original
Also, knowp had the one diss that i didnt get at all
This thing could go either way......great battle.......im giving this to miracle by a hair......no hate
\/ = Miracle
But thats just imolol
this fag couldnt get in my crew, so he went and made one up
to compete, TNT will need a Miracle.............not to be gay as fuc
thought you was going to finish it different but ok start
ya match against marv was a drugging, and he beat you sober
funny how you was callin him faggot....but he left YOU bendin over
okkish at best
read ya OM. you cant be serious, you must be sick in the head
u had me thinkin Bible cuz after seein the Pyramid it felt like I had the plague
plague and head?, didn't hit hard for me
that probably went over your head like your mom, the cock enforcer
i mean those lips stay soo juicy and drippin that Carmex tries to endorce her
lol
which goes to show why you suck, u get no props or thanks
but ya records coo cuz ya been on killin spree...battlin no one in the ranks
mehhh okk
Average verse from you here
vS
if this were a boxing match..i swear i'd KO this fool
people be waiting on the bell to ring early, like half days in school..
too simple, a like blah blah bar, too simplee to hit hard
n with guns im visious..i'll load it up n send you to hell
cuz my bullets like knights in chess...watch them move in L..
okk, decent concept here, not exucuted the best but yeah its ok
on my level? lmao...grab a ladder cuz you'll need that
cant you see that; im above leg, ya'll should call me knee cap..
see the concept, you could of made this different and better, it dosn't hit very hard just saying you can call me knee cap, it dosn't hit hard, also the knee cap is in the middle of the leg so tbh has no sting what so ever
KP getting vet status? pleasee, he wouldnt see that in a kettle
so he changed his name to legendary
.............................cuz he knows he'll never see that medal..
okayy, concepts there again just didn't play it right. Still ok though
in ur crew ur the low man...responsible? there not giving ya
cd puts less pressure on leg ---------->then a broken fibula..
alrightt i surpose, ok closer
Your coming harder now miracle, you get concepts but you don't go deep into them, you make it really simple, need to add in the cool mis directions etc, instead of these simple bars that go on, blah blah like a blah, fuck the similies they're basic as fuck, keep at it
This is a few OK bars vS another few ok bars, leg had another bar which made me lol but then a bar that didn't rhyme, leg also had a strong opener which was prob my fav of the battle.
Therefore..
v/ Leg
Vote Dq'ed...Crew Vote
-Quest.
Last edited by Quest.; March 7th, 2011 at 02:55 PM
let me take you to the movies.
uhhhhhhhh
Prophet is in my crew n urs so votes cool, faze is a crew vote tho
stop freeposting.
i cant mod my own battle so i cant delete his vote.
but i did pm quest and he will handle it when he gets back on.
really close battle here. both had some okay lines, and some lines that missed.
Legendary's opener was prolly his best bar. Nice flip/punch. the Marv battle was a good personal, but nothing too dope. the OM line was a personal too, but head/plague don't rhyme. the wet, juicy / carmex line was funny, but wasnt the hardest punch. your closer was a good personal and flip. overall decent punch. you had good structure and flow as well, but at the same time it felt rushed.
Miracle. opener was good, a bit wordy though. same thing with the chess line. I think it could have been a much doper punch though, but good concept. again with the above leg call me knee cap, I think again, simple could have been wayyy better. the legendary/never see that medal was a dope personal and good name flip. best punch of your verse. and your closer was nice too. good flip, although you already used a Leg nameplay punchline.
overall really close battle like I said. Miracle had the better concepts IMO but none of his punches hit as hard as Legendary's better punches did. overall I'm going with Legendary because he had a much polished verse and structure. Miracle keep working on tour setups and you'll be dope, you defintely have some nice concepts.
v/ Legendary
Originally Posted by Legendary.
one on one? please....
if this were a boxing match..i swear i'd KO this fool
people be waiting on the bell to ring early, like half days in school..
Decent Start...
n with guns im visious..i'll load it up n send you to hell
cuz my bullets like knights in chess...watch them move in L..
Good Follow Up...
on my level? lmao...grab a ladder cuz you'll need that
cant you see that; im above leg, ya'll should call me knee cap..
Keepin Consistancy...
KP getting vet status? pleasee, he wouldnt see that in a kettle
so he changed his name to legendary
.............................cuz he knows he'll never see that medal..
Eh...Just Another Metal Flip...
in ur crew ur the low man...responsible? there not giving ya
cd puts less pressure on leg ---------->then a broken fibula..
Eh...Okish Flip...Would've Had Better Effect If Not Referenced Earlier...
Vote/Miracle...Verse Was More Consistant Throughout...Started Off Decent and Maintained Towards The End...Kp Started Off Ok...But Then Tailed Off...
I Have Spoken...
Ya Basic Raps Will Leave You Basically Wrapped...
It Is What It Is...
The Specialist: \ thu spe-sul-ist\ n 1. One You Don't Want To See In A Battle 2. adj. Deadly 3. Lyrically Combative Beyond Lethalness 4. Also Known As TS / sent: "For Health Reasons, It Is Not Wise To Mess With The Specialist."
this fag couldnt get in my crew, so he went and made one up
to compete, TNT will need a Miracle.............not to be gay as fuc
lol
vs
n with guns im visious..i'll load it up n send you to hell
cuz my bullets like knights in chess...watch them move in L..
good concept
in ur crew ur the low man...responsible? there not giving ya
cd puts less pressure on leg ---------->then a broken fibula..
iight
Legend didnt drop hard at all. ohkish battle with only a few quotes. i gotta give this to mir with more quotes and consistency. no hate
V/Mir
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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