need help with my flow

[kaino21]

Im not sure if this is the thread where I can ask a question like this but
I'm feelin kinda upset with my flow and I was wondering if you guys can check out one of my songs and tell me what Im doing wrong with my flow
http://www.myspace.com/kianomusic23

[Roe]

You sound like you're trying to hard to sound like something else. Embrace your natural sound, if you sound confident, people will like it.