Vacant House

[QwarterZ]

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I'm tryna proclaim a vision, quite insane and instant
everything went from lame views, plain to prism
it starts to come clear and a lot of it do shine
but there ain't enough love to comment it two times
when all you see is the same thing, repetitive closure
see I rather spit it, let it shine with excellent odors
let it take in the ambiance of the room, the audience
oddly commences to dancin', like the prom we been
too, swoop through in some of the latest fall fashions
just cuz we switch up the style it just follows patterns
a lot of people seem stuck in a rotation, what the fuck?
if you coming up atleast try to be yourself, dumb as fuck
how they view us as a low percentage of lost talent
we try to get pass the atmosphere, most lost their balance
still tryna find it, it's timeless when you missing a few screws
a few broads that got you twisted and started skipping school
just to see, and they got you in the back just twisting weed
all in all you think fucking would get you the missing piece
that's when a child comes in and your like I can't do it
but that's life it's a wall and you always got your back to it
so who would take you seriously if you never try harder
jobs is needed but the bosses always got you light offers
like you can work when we need you but right now we don't
and we start to feel like the resin thats light brown, we smoked
and let out some of our emotions thru weed or nicotine
seen sicker things but stick to the script until it emits a scene
where we can get a few dollars out of it like a strippers seams
but it leaks through our hands with all the problems, fixtures mean
like a faucet left to drip, now your girl sends mixed messages
like shes going to keep it but you agreed you ain't ready, senselessness
that's all I could say, because her brothers know you round the way
and thats when they offer you the chance to slang that pound of yay
not knowing you could let everything fall apart you take that route
till you lose another one and you left alone in that vacant house....




just keyed this up..........

[QwarterZ]

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[Wise Ways]

this was pretty cool. kinda laid back to me.. i did like this segment more then the rest, just sick to me.

when all you see is the same thing, repetitive closure
see I rather spit it, let it shine with excellent odors
let it take in the ambiance of the room, the audience
oddly commences to dancin', like the prom we been

you kinda bounced around a few subjects with this..you went from like job type stuff to girlfreinds and fucking up in life sort of... kind of ended abruptly with the whole pound of yaya thing but its a cool little key.. keep it up man.

[Genocide]

yeah, this piece was def a little different than the norm i would expect to see from you.. im starting to notice a slight style switch in your techniques here and there -yeah? maybe. as far as content -this one seemed a little scattered, kind of like you have some real serious things in your mind -but cant find the focuss to let it out the way you really want to.. therefor it kind of came out not the way you wanted to -yeah? maybe. had some stretched lines in it. couldnt get the jayz instro to play for some reason -but i still enjoyed the read 12. peash holmes