20 Lines, Due Friday
King
Cry
20 Lines, Due Friday
yup
yessir. gl
This dude's clueless, couldn't recognize a punch if it banged him in the teeth
So I guess I'll let Cry in the loop...then tighten it n hang him from a tree
Can't see how ya mind works, dont think you can make rhymes worse
Cry wants to trim the fat from FL...when he should focus on his waistline first
The game is on, n this flaming gays style is major wrong
Dude's tryin to trick himself...he's got a list of regular johns two pages long
Lonely bitch, women won't woo or date ya cuz your a loser aint ya?
So nervous 'round chicks his palms get sweaty<--which gives 'em lube for later
Can't say that your wack dude, but i don't need that to attack you
Dude's got 11 medals...if I lived in Albany, Oregon i'd have time for that too
Cry must be mod of the year...^^pretty sure what I read is real clearOriginally Posted by Cry
I mean he set out to make an example of ONE dude...yet he's still here!!!
I compete at levels this chump'd get blazed n killed in with force
So I'm likely to raise the stakes...your likely to raise my children as yours
This one'll haunt this dude, shouldn't be surprised to get caught n lose
On here ya runnin' a forum...in real life you'd be runnin' ya watch n shoes
Bottom feeding homo, I've met scum but your twice the maggot
King'll leave butterflies in ya stomach...not the feeling, i mean the knife you faggot!
Ya record says 161 opponents were wack, where's ya big moment been at?
All this time n the only thing we'll remember 'bout him is that he reopened the chat
He always took this site too serious, and FL's drownin' 'em farther
before they could take some off the top, they removed his crown at the barber
never held the LLL title, yet still my hand and spear's stronger
funny.. I'm "that guy who never champed" & you been at it a year longer
ya'll lookin' for an outlaw? sure... I write all my punches at large
but on a search for the King of Kings you'll just find every dunce is in charge
each line & each fuckin' bar... I cause children to feel their end
how I straight dropped the fuckin' G, and every guy tried to kill their Kin
King ain't brain or brawn, he's lame & soft, only seen as a pass to me
such a bitch, I expect 'em to switch crowns... then sing Bohemian Rhapsody
there's an idea -- you should be mod!! I'll bet there's more to that, son
maybe we should get a better champ, too... the other forums have one!!!
vampire fuck... go out in daylight, try to shake ya illest fear
cuz you may be shinin' in battles... but I don't need stakes to kill a queer
faggot's crossin' the line, but it's too late, I'm droppin' him next
you tryin' to step outside ya boundaries?? << that's called the opposite sex
he may listen to hip-hop.. but he's silly stocked with the novice shit
so when we say King's 2 metal for rap... we're really talkin accomplishments
I took one look at the new FL... and I had a hunch it was bad
it has to be.. when DLB's one liners are better than a punch from the champ
20...
Lonely bitch, women won't woo or date ya cuz your a loser aint ya?
So nervous 'round chicks his palms get sweaty<--which gives 'em lube for later
^^ lol Nice
Bottom feeding homo, I've met scum but your twice the maggot
King'll leave butterflies in ya stomach...not the feeling, i mean the knife you faggot!
^^ Cool line
VS
King ain't brain or brawn, he's lame & soft, only seen as a pass to me
such a bitch, I expect 'em to switch crowns... then sing Bohemian Rhapsody
^^ Decent
faggot's crossin' the line, but it's too late, I'm droppin' him next
you tryin' to step outside ya boundaries?? << that's called the opposite sex
Nice..lol
This was a real close battle, both of ya had nice punches, but ima have to go with King. I think he did a little better...but either way good read
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Lonely bitch, women won't woo or date ya cuz your a loser aint ya?
So nervous 'round chicks his palms get sweaty<--which gives 'em lube for later
Can't say that your wack dude, but i don't need that to attack you
Dude's got 11 medals...if I lived in Albany, Oregon i'd have time for that too
I compete at levels this chump'd get blazed n killed in with force
So I'm likely to raise the stakes...your likely to raise my children as yours
vs...
there's an idea -- you should be mod!! I'll bet there's more to that, son
maybe we should get a better champ, too... the other forums have one!!!
faggot's crossin' the line, but it's too late, I'm droppin' him next
you tryin' to step outside ya boundaries?? << that's called the opposite sex
verdict- this battle was 1 sided.. king came out swinging and for the most part of it, was hitting... cry came a lil half assed in my opinion, either that or he's rusty? iono.... but yeah, easy decision... kings hits were a lot fresher, creative and just simply better than crys... that sweaty palm line was easily bar of the battle so I gotta give props for that one.... vote- king.
ARCH, remember to post these points on my Phu Que account m8.... thanks.
This dude's clueless, couldn't recognize a punch if it banged him in the teeth
So I guess I'll let Cry in the loop...then tighten it n hang him from a tree
decent
Can't see how ya mind works, dont think you can make rhymes worse
Cry wants to trim the fat from FL...when he should focus on his waistline first
it was a bit predictable but good punch
The game is on, n this flaming gays style is major wrong
Dude's tryin to trick himself...he's got a list of regular johns two pages long
lol
Lonely bitch, women won't woo or date ya cuz your a loser aint ya?
So nervous 'round chicks his palms get sweaty<--which gives 'em lube for later
lol alright
Can't say that your wack dude, but i don't need that to attack you
Dude's got 11 medals...if I lived in Albany, Oregon i'd have time for that too
lol
Cry must be mod of the year...^^pretty sure what I read is real clear
I mean he set out to make an example of ONE dude...yet he's still here!!!
a bit of a statement, but I liked it too
I compete at levels this chump'd get blazed n killed in with force
So I'm likely to raise the stakes...your likely to raise my children as yours
wasn't feeling
This one'll haunt this dude, shouldn't be surprised to get caught n lose
On here ya runnin' a forum...in real life you'd be runnin' ya watch n shoes
meh...
Bottom feeding homo, I've met scum but your twice the maggot
King'll leave butterflies in ya stomach...not the feeling, i mean the knife you faggot!
ok
Ya record says 161 opponents were wack, where's ya big moment been at?
All this time n the only thing we'll remember 'bout him is that he reopened the chat
alright closer
King you started off real good, but fell off a bit towards the end
vs
He always took this site too serious, and FL's drownin' 'em farther
before they could take some off the top, they removed his crown at the barber
meh..
never held the LLL title, yet still my hand and spear's stronger
funny.. I'm "that guy who never champed" & you been at it a year longer
lol
ya'll lookin' for an outlaw? sure... I write all my punches at large
but on a search for the King of Kings you'll just find every dunce is in charge
meh...
each line & each fuckin' bar... I cause children to feel their end
how I straight dropped the fuckin' G, and every guy tried to kill their Kin
meh...
King ain't brain or brawn, he's lame & soft, only seen as a pass to me
such a bitch, I expect 'em to switch crowns... then sing Bohemian Rhapsody
lol
there's an idea -- you should be mod!! I'll bet there's more to that, son
maybe we should get a better champ, too... the other forums have one!!!
the wording could've been better but good one
vampire fuck... go out in daylight, try to shake ya illest fear
cuz you may be shinin' in battles... but I don't need stakes to kill a queer
I got the concept, but didn't work for me
faggot's crossin' the line, but it's too late, I'm droppin' him next
you tryin' to step outside ya boundaries?? << that's called the opposite sex
wording was eh but still good punch
he may listen to hip-hop.. but he's silly stocked with the novice shit
so when we say King's 2 metal for rap... we're really talkin accomplishments
good wordplay+misdirection
I took one look at the new FL... and I had a hunch it was bad
it has to be.. when DLB's one liners are better than a punch from the champ
ok
v/King
King:
Lonely bitch, women won't woo or date ya cuz your a loser aint ya?
So nervous 'round chicks his palms get sweaty<--which gives 'em lube for later
lol..nice set up...overall good bar...
I compete at levels this chump'd get blazed n killed in with force
So I'm likely to raise the stakes...your likely to raise my children as yours
yo! lol hella disrespectful...i like that kinda shit
This one'll haunt this dude, shouldn't be surprised to get caught n lose
On here ya runnin' a forum...in real life you'd be runnin' ya watch n shoes
lol..pretty cool line...could be considered played, but done well enough...
Bottom feeding homo, I've met scum but your twice the maggot
King'll leave butterflies in ya stomach...not the feeling, i mean the knife you faggot!
pretty good...i swear i had the same concept vs hypno a couple days ago, but just in reverse tho...
Cry:
vampire fuck... go out in daylight, try to shake ya illest fear
cuz you may be shinin' in battles... but I don't need stakes to kill a queer
eh...decent...
faggot's crossin' the line, but it's too late, I'm droppin' him next
you tryin' to step outside ya boundaries?? << that's called the opposite sex
pretty cool line...
I took one look at the new FL... and I had a hunch it was bad
it has to be.. when DLB's one liners are better than a punch from the champ
decent...
Overall King pretty much killed it and Cry came lackluster...no hate...just my opinion...King's verse had much more sting to it and was a better battle verse...rhymes, concepts, disses were all better...
v/King
4 votes and one poll...this is going to take forever lol
upppp
what made my decision in this battle was the level of consistency, and with 20 lines that becomes even more important, thats alot of material and if you dont keep the bar up the whole way through it can hurt ya in the end.
King Fav Bar:
Can't say that your wack dude, but i don't need that to attack you
Dude's got 11 medals...if I lived in Albany, Oregon i'd have time for that too
personal, usually like some complexity but there was something i liked about the straight forward approach of this punch
vs
Cry Fav Bar:
faggot's crossin' the line, but it's too late, I'm droppin' him next
you tryin' to step outside ya boundaries?? << that's called the opposite sex
didnt exactly like the way you phrased it but it was kinda original with the boundries, had big potential
overall:
again came down to consistency and it really seemed like king carried through better all the way through his verse for the most part
v.KING
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