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    Meet Demands

    Meet Demands

    Do a mean slaughter then clean with water to get the mess
    Off the floor after I toss hardcore rhymes down the throat
    Of microphones, the element of words could cause hope
    And development in nerds stuff happen when rapping dope
    Script andmy quotes rip paper andstrip the vapor when I roam
    The sun goddess was right progress might have gone on
    Too long and the true song is not being sung on cell phones
    Like Morpheus I’m in a keen matrix can’t dodge the extreme
    Hatred and my dreams are sacred battling agents on TV screen
    While Neo be slow to learn dang is he the chosen on the team?
    Look its random clear on why I abandon my career as
    A rapper, this is a clear chapter of failure now fear this jazz
    So old fashion as I cease to control my passion for HIP HOP
    On the streets founded you can catch a beat down in flip flops
    If you don’ t keep your lips lock it’s hard to be on the tip top
    Of success, my brain remain intact it’s a plain act to trip a lot
    Imagination can cause fragmentation in your thoughts must drop
    Flavor wild and adorn as a new style is born while I smile at pron
    My bling bring a stream of traffic the gleam is graphic like tall corn
    Stalks, this rhyme mess is a combined process of microphone
    Meltdown I step around town burning up with lyrics in my dome
    My code is like a road its made of asphalt parade on sidewalks
    Like predestrians, cross streets listening to boss beats pride caught
    In Burger Kings odering fries and slaughtering guys looking to battle
    Make prediction dust off my flaws do a abolition on unjust laws, rattle
    The public, my body is a mechanical device living an animal life
    As a robot no spot is safe

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    Re: Meet Demands

    started off like horrorcore, then turned into IDK what, i liked the start

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    Re: Meet Demands

    ItsKnucklez thanks for the props on this

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    Re: Meet Demands

    ItsKnucklez thanks for the props on this

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    Re: Meet Demands

    pretty lame

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    Re: Meet Demands

    thanks for props and critiques from those who knows rap and of course drop their own verses

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    Re: Meet Demands

    Quote Originally Posted by rhymebad View Post
    Meet Demands


    A rapper, this is a clear chapter of failure now fear this jazz
    So old fashion as I cease to control my passion for HIP HOP
    On the streets founded you can catch a beat down in flip flops
    If you don’ t keep your lips lock it’s hard to be on the tip top
    Of success, my brain remain intact it’s a plain act to trip a lot
    Imagination can cause fragmentation in your thoughts must drop
    i really feel this part good multis and you rapped somethin i can relate to good work

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    Re: Meet Demands

    Instead of writting 5 verses a day, I think you should work on one. I think you need to go into writting with a clear topic in mind and stick to it. Anything that goes off topic or is wack, take it out and try again.

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    Re: Meet Demands

    Like predestrians, cross streets listening to boss beats pride caught
    In Burger Kings odering fries and slaughtering guys looking to battle
    I'm not sure where Burger King fits in here bad.... Its like you slaughtering guys but you're also looking to battle... just a little confusing.. The beginning part was good but it seems like you fell off after a while

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