Thank ytou very Kindley Sir. Great Feed.
Thank ytou very Kindley Sir. Great Feed.
Rivalyn
murders for fun, & piercing threw veins, beating you, all flat
I wish I lived in a world where i can Kill you;..Off eye contact
This was decent
far from lazy, A soul thats demonic,Close to satans stats
When in the zone, I lose my mind. Lucifer Couldnt Hold me back
Nice..
errelevent Intricates get stuck, but the 8th's on a constant slaughter
you beleive in god & cinder block shoes; Lets see you walk on water
lmao this was good
I advise you take a bombard trip, and give the stage some space
& if you happen to make it past the 7 plagues..you'll die by the 8th
Pretty sick closer
All in all this was a nice verse from you ...i felt your wordin was quite good and the verse was nicely concised. Good verse to get things goin in this OM piece.
Axeman
New off the block, just came around, 8th is new & replenished,
Here to eat up the bitches, Riv & Spit didn't completely finish..
Ight bar..simple but effective
Imprison fools, & kill em too.. Hold them hostage to commit,
With starvation as comedy, drinking blood from writs we've slit
damn nasty shiz! lol
We're here to stay, so back away, & its time for a controller,
Fuck all the other Plagues spreading, 8th's already takin' over..
Sick man
We hate the world, & all the haters, plus it's not a suprise,
People cry when others pass, we cry from laughter when they die
lol harsh man.. harsh
We're sick as cancer, with no answer, & we never play around
Keepin' the murdered in the house so people always hangin' out..
Decent bar right here
Your verse was pretty strong n consitent throughout...U had some decent to dope bars and a few funny n harsh ones which freshened things up a lil. Wording was pretty okay too.Good work man
Erun
One thousand paper cuts applied to chest n back
Put hands in vice grips; watch them twist n crack
Decent man ..set up was pretty good too
A pool of blood, fuck it make it a lake or two
Tell that bitch mother of yours to pray for you
Lol i liked the set up more..
She’s next so tell me who’s gonna kneel for her?
I will, just to watch her die till her view is blurred
Haha
Tilt of head, black mask, watch the eyes pull you in
As I stick the blade past your lungs, gums n tongue
From beneath your chin.
Nasty shiz man.. too graphic for me lol
Thought ur verse was ight although it could have been a lil more complex but the verse was not stretched as the others (not that the other verses were mad stretched lol) and flowed pretty fast which was a good way to end the piece. Keep it up man.
Pretty dope piece from you guys keep it up for real i was feelin this piece...
rtf please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7504958
Thanks, Up.
Damn definitely some sick shit, as expected from 8th Plague. Just as Tim had said, each verse brought a differant element to the table, overall dope though. It was fckin long bitch to read, but this could definitely be a audio piece if it was shorter and with a hook n chorus. Shit was grimy, and had a hostel vibe going with it, like damn these niggas dont give a fuck, "grab my scalpal, crack a snapple" haha.
Im sittin here wonderin why I didnt get on that..haha, but yeah, guess that might kill my chances for OM of the Month, not like im getting a lot of feed on it anyway..lol keep doing what youre doin fam.
Damn,this shit was SICK,literally..lol..The first verse was dope..sinister and bloody - and I liked it.Some lines were just unbelievably awesome..Wish I could write something half as good sometime soon
"you believe in god & cinder block shoes; Lets see you walk on water"
Thanks..
good shit men, it come together nice.. rivalyn, you spelled some words line .. its mach 5 not mack 5, and irrelevant nor errelevant.. solid flow, for the most part, a bit bumpy in some places... clever liens here and there, although the haiti one was a bit forced... good shit overall
axeman - more pretty good shit, that was enjoyable... what i liked most about this piece as a whole is how the styles all meshed together.. it was just a show-off verse, buit you all showed off in the same horror-core way.. way to mesh there
erun - you had the shortest lines, and i feltthat that contributed to the flow the most, making your part quite smooth.. some transition lines were a bitbumpy.. like the 2nd to third line.. the rhyming transition was a bit abrupt and bumpy, but still solid verse all togetehr
good shit gents, get in ss, shit be poppin off in there
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i like the clash of styles which made this read very interesting
my fav bar from rivalyns verse was
irrelevent Intricates get stuck, but the 8th's on a constant slaughter
you beleive in god & cinder block shoes; Lets see you walk on water
low was good all the way through n u came hella nasty on this good shit
axe man my fav bar of yours was
Imprison fools, & kill em too.. Hold them hostage to commit,
With starvation as comedy, drinking blood from writs we've slit
n erun
Twisted thoughts turning into listless plots
Jaded by corpses, I kid you not I witness lots
i thought that would sound hella cool if someone spat that
nice nasty piece good shit guys i dug this ish
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...406/index.html
I just deleted 39 posts.. that's THREE PAGES, Rivalyn. I need you to calm down on upping this piece so much.. just let the feed come in.. leave feed on other pieces.. leave the link to this one... okay bro?
no need to use 3 pages worth of ups...
lmfao. true story..
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