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Thread: Dez vs Criticize

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    Dez vs Criticize

    10 linez due by midnight

    chek in

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    uhm we are in diff time zones, approx how man hours until midnight?

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    just drop within 12 hours

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    lets make it 4 hours?
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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    just drop within the deadline... im busy right now champ

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    heads you look up to duck me get the hint criticize is a fame shooter
    you should have got the cue^ like stepping up for a game of snooker
    knowp sets up his battles as Dez! my opinion that makes you a truly gay bitch
    this guy cant be straight? hes even CONFUSED about what his username is
    have your heart murmuring if you test me so just back down-trying
    i leave cunts flat lining lying deceased; your just flat out lieing
    when i was young this phrase left me deluded a bit, confused for a tick
    all made sense when i told peeps who i was battling they said DONT; Know shit/
    Im A+ your skills are B grade at best so its true that you suck,
    so its safe to conclude that your Bnnoying as fuck/



    dont like to explain but A.nnoying B.nnoying guy is 1 grade below my level at all times


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...484/index.html
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    Last edited by Quest.; January 9th, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    im bout to drop in a few wit links
    sorry bout the delay; life came up... lol

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    gotta take my champ match L out on you...

    sorry!

    LOL!


    K lost in the champ match, but everyone knows GOW is a beast
    They said don’t Criticiize yourself….. but I knew I’d need an easy win for the week
    N heres this geek, pocket protector like his bank is involved
    How you gonna Chase the belt bitin punches, no credit for this fraud
    Im back goin hard, like man of steel away from the criptonite
    U battling on RB is like bulimic teens in skinny jeans, You’ll never be tight
    Im K’n this dyke, punches like mike leavin you staggerin
    Choke u wit the ropes til ya faces turns more oranges than mandarins
    Suffocate ya bandages, Doctors mad cuz I rip ya stitches out
    Ya inner child screamin? I’ll turn Ike, Turner ‘round n knock Bytches out


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...712/index.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...690/index.html
    Last edited by Quest.; January 9th, 2010 at 11:30 PM

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    knowp sets up his battles as Dez! my opinion that makes you a truly gay bitch
    this guy cant be straight? hes even CONFUSED about what his username is
    ^^dope for real

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    K lost in the champ match, but everyone knows GOW is a beast
    They said don’t Criticiize yourself….. but I knew I’d need an easy win for the week
    ^^LOL
    Im back goin hard, like man of steel away from the criptonite
    U battling on RB is like bulimic teens in skinny jeans, You’ll never be tight
    ^^haha aight
    Suffocate ya bandages, Doctors mad cuz I rip ya stitches out
    Ya inner child screamin? I’ll turn Ike, Turner ‘round n knock Bytches out
    ^^lmfao.....

    V/KnowP, he had the more consistent verse. Crit, u had one good bar, but the rest wasnt too good. Know, solid verse here fam. No hate to either, good shit...


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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    crit
    heads you look up to duck me get the hint criticize is a fame shooter
    you should have got the cue^ like stepping up for a game of snooker
    ehh..dont like your wording here..the concept wasnt great, but it was workable
    knowp sets up his battles as Dez! my opinion that makes you a truly gay bitch
    this guy cant be straight? hes even CONFUSED about what his username is
    haa...thats nice
    have your heart murmuring if you test me so just back down-trying
    i leave cunts flat lining lying deceased; your just flat out lieing
    hmmm..swag on this is good...nice lil filler line
    when i was young this phrase left me deluded a bit, confused for a tick
    all made sense when i told peeps who i was battling they said DONT; Know shit/
    ehh forced..it came across akward
    Im A+ your skills are B grade at best so its true that you suck,
    so its safe to conclude that your Bnnoying as fuck/
    nope, weak ending

    dez
    K lost in the champ match, but everyone knows GOW is a beast
    They said don’t Criticiize yourself….. but I knew I’d need an easy win for the week
    horrible opener..you dissed yourself here
    N heres this geek, pocket protector like his bank is involved
    How you gonna Chase the belt bitin punches, no credit for this fraud
    naa..thats a miss, the line is forced..very stretched concept wise
    Im back goin hard, like man of steel away from the criptonite
    U battling on RB is like bulimic teens in skinny jeans, You’ll never be tight
    wtf? dude...this is so fucking played..horrible
    Im K’n this dyke, punches like mike leavin you staggerin
    Choke u wit the ropes til ya faces turns more oranges than mandarins
    nope
    Suffocate ya bandages, Doctors mad cuz I rip ya stitches out
    Ya inner child screamin? I’ll turn Ike, Turner ‘round n knock Bytches out
    wp was kinda cool...but iunno about the actual execution here...


    dez was really off in this battle...crit had a hit or two, and thats all he needed to take it

    v/criticize
    Not Impressed

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    heads you look up to duck me get the hint criticize is a fame shooter
    you should have got the cue^ like stepping up for a game of snooker
    eh...
    knowp sets up his battles as Dez! my opinion that makes you a truly gay bitch
    this guy cant be straight? hes even CONFUSED about what his username is
    ok...
    have your heart murmuring if you test me so just back down-trying
    i leave cunts flat lining lying deceased; your just flat out lieing
    eh... decentish...
    when i was young this phrase left me deluded a bit, confused for a tick
    all made sense when i told peeps who i was battling they said DONT; Know shit/
    wording is off...
    Im A+ your skills are B grade at best so its true that you suck,
    so its safe to conclude that your Bnnoying as fuck/
    no...

    vs

    K lost in the champ match, but everyone knows GOW is a beast
    They said don’t Criticiize yourself….. but I knew I’d need an easy win for the week
    weakish...
    N heres this geek, pocket protector like his bank is involved
    How you gonna Chase the belt bitin punches, no credit for this fraud
    eh... bad wording...
    Im back goin hard, like man of steel away from the criptonite
    U battling on RB is like bulimic teens in skinny jeans, You’ll never be tight
    wow... weak and played concept...
    Im K’n this dyke, punches like mike leavin you staggerin
    Choke u wit the ropes til ya faces turns more oranges than mandarins
    awful wording...
    Suffocate ya bandages, Doctors mad cuz I rip ya stitches out
    Ya inner child screamin? I’ll turn Ike, Turner ‘round n knock Bytches out
    once again, bad wording...

    Seeing Crit's verse i was expecting Know to KO... i was wrong... KP, maybe you should rest for a bit... all these battles so close together is throwing you off your game... like you're running out of concepts...

    vote Criticize

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    well damn...

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    knowp sets up his battles as Dez! my opinion that makes you a truly gay bitch
    this guy cant be straight? hes even CONFUSED about what his username is
    have your heart murmuring if you test me so just back down-trying
    i leave cunts flat lining lying deceased; your just flat out lieing

    vs

    K lost in the champ match, but everyone knows GOW is a beast
    They said don’t Criticiize yourself….. but I knew I’d need an easy win for the week
    Suffocate ya bandages, Doctors mad cuz I rip ya stitches out
    Ya inner child screamin? I’ll turn Ike, Turner ‘round n knock Bytches out


    Hmm dodgey battle coz neither of u did as well as i would have expected but u both still managed to pull off some decent quotables. Both had some real weak punches but based on the quotables i think KP's were slighter stronger. Crit u had some ideas that i feel u didnt pull off that well. No hate to either though.

    Vote/KP

    rtf vs mc safety please!

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    bump

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    Re: Dez vs Criticize

    heads you look up to duck me get the hint criticize is a fame shooter
    you should have got the cue^ like stepping up for a game of snooker
    Meh
    knowp sets up his battles as Dez! my opinion that makes you a truly gay bitch
    this guy cant be straight? hes even CONFUSED about what his username is
    Alright Bit Stretched But Decent
    have your heart murmuring if you test me so just back down-trying
    i leave cunts flat lining lying deceased; your just flat out lieing
    Lol Love The Word Play
    when i was young this phrase left me deluded a bit, confused for a tick
    all made sense when i told peeps who i was battling they said DONT; Know shit/
    Ok Ok
    Im A+ your skills are B grade at best so its true that you suck,
    so its safe to conclude that your Bnnoying as fuck/
    Alright

    You Had Some Good Punches None Really Amazed Me But All out Good Drop 6/10

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    K lost in the champ match, but everyone knows GOW is a beast
    They said don’t Criticiize yourself….. but I knew I’d need an easy win for the week
    Yea Um You Dissed Yourself Here More Then Anything
    N heres this geek, pocket protector like his bank is involved
    How you gonna Chase the belt bitin punches, no credit for this fraud
    I Think This Punch Killed It, Best Punch Of The Battle.. NICE
    Im back goin hard, like man of steel away from the criptonite
    U battling on RB is like bulimic teens in skinny jeans, You’ll never be tight
    Lol IDK If Its Because Im New But This Was Kinda Dope
    Im K’n this dyke, punches like mike leavin you staggerin
    Choke u wit the ropes til ya faces turns more oranges than mandarins
    The Set up Was Dope But The Ending Meh, Could Of Been Harder
    Suffocate ya bandages, Doctors mad cuz I rip ya stitches out
    Ya inner child screamin? I’ll turn Ike, Turner ‘round n knock Bytches out
    Meh

    I Agree That Both Could of Came Way Harder But That Chase Line Won It For You KnowP 7/10

    In The End It Was A Decent Battle
    VOTE=Dez/KnowP

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