Fuck the Net/Life Part 2

[Calli]

I FED 3 OTHER DROPS, IT WILL NOT LET ME POST LINKS RIGHT NOW.

not lookin for the typical bitch
just a steady woman to give habitual dick
then send her to the kitchen
bitch brought me a drink with the damn sammich missin
she aint getting the clues
cant just claim to be wifey, gotta get in the shoes
or get up and move
i got a bitch on line 2, im just fed up with you
something better ensues, she the dancin type
with a Web cam...........no clothes and a Mic
in the middle of the night we get the anthem right
"its simply fuck till there aint no more candle lights"
sighhhhhhhhh man....still need more
this Scorpios a savage and dedicated till she's sore
Part 2 in the Saga of these Filthy Whores
back to the problem at hand
i wanna kick her, kidnap my daughter and scram
she always on the Beef Tip
but I stay on that Cheap shit - so I bought her som SPAM
DAMN!!!!! u killed all of my trust
sayin we can rebuild our Love, bitch i called it a Nut
after that, i can call it enough
i give a fuck about you, go ahead - Call it a Bluff
husssshhhh i got moves to make, u still lyin
cuz what kind of mother
Fucks for 2 hours while her baby is still CRYIN!!
never mind.....
my stint on the Net is a mear blemish
my cultivation of perfection, the blessin is near finished
fear has deminished as it sifts thru the void
as my reality rips i simply grit thru the noise
wade thru my faith and all the mystical ploys
that God has left us....more like pitiful toys
this is the birth, maturation of Fate
in a world of darkness all vaccinations can wait
Gods Speeds....more like a race for the grave
2012 brings Hell, compelled by a nation of Hate
you know what they say
"Revenge is a Dish Best Served Cold" let me take em a Plate

[Hush]

this was dope, the entire piece had a real clean easy to follow flow, an you did a impeccable job of staying on topic. I can see this kinda verse being easily recordable, an u had just enuff wit in there to keep me reading/interested

Plus I love the subject matter..First I'd say 10 lines had me captivated.
dope shit yo. I could def see a collab between us.

[Buzz_LiGHTY3AR]

Gee wizz, this goes hard on a kazillion different levels, props for the male perspective too. I never imagined that a female emcee could go-so-HARD. I'm sittin' over here second guessing my own talents.. but, I digress.

It flows really well and paints a vivid image in the mind, pieces like this I consider to be artwork because not only can we feel and hear where the lyrics are coming from, we can see it too..

Nice work, ten thumbs up..^_^

[Calli]

Gee wizz, this goes hard on a kazillion different levels, props for the male perspective too. I never imagined that a female emcee could go-so-HARD. I'm sittin' over here second guessing my own talents.. but, I digress.

It flows really well and paints a vivid image in the mind, pieces like this I consider to be artwork because not only can we feel and hear where the lyrics are coming from, we can see it too..

Nice work, ten thumbs up..^_^

ima a Dude..........i know she sexy.

and thanks for the feed yall, and im always up for a collab Hush......

thanks for the time both of you.....

[Mimic]

i felt the multi's in here which gave a good solid edge on the flow towards this peice, i thought the wording was okayy but i didn't real come to grasps with the topic as a whole, some bits seemed off but in other places they were decent, i definatley felt the anger into it so that was decent, i would say alltogether this peice was okayy, although in some places i would say improve on the whole concept of the topic and try and collaberate maybe a few more 'technical' words as it were to make the peice more interesting, but if you add interesting words make sure you keep on topic,
decent read keep it up ::