thanx everyone....
thanx everyone....
AI
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word, thanks to all who took the time.. shit's a long piece.
you're welcome
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...759/index.html
I am belittled with each step back,
i push to the future but my time capsules cracked.
I'm wacked with great reality that slaps
TRUTH between the eyes of no norm on crack
-This was intense
Icy palms sweat, while I think of previously killed nam vets
Still I put out my stong neck for unknown political concepts
My unit's in it for a long stretch, too far past bomb threats
These war scars reach depths a man's soul has never gone yet
-Best part in my opinion
i marked him my target of carnage and embarked to carve it...
'rapist'........ and rip apart his carcass like a vulture at harvest
gripping the dark arts of a cultures market
but my girl said no! thats when the drugs started!
...............................................and when the thug departed!
-this part had some serious emotion you thought long and hard here.
and I think, "well maybe - but tell please.. will I live?
will I be able to go home to my ki- ..oh shit" I cringe
-oh you bitch i was so into it i thought it would end with kids but wounderful switch in the mid verse so its like im really there thinking as i ready will i see my ki- booom im hit lol dont know how to explain it but amazing!
The whole rap was "the shit" Loved it!