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    I Cant seem To Flow This

    Creation And determination Leads to Mastering Raps And ELevation
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    I Have been tryin to record this to read it it flow but singing i seem to have what should i fine tune in it to make flow better on a beat ???

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    Re: I Cant seem To Flow This

    Just edit your lyrics.. edit words.. swap words out to make it flow better.

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    Re: I Cant seem To Flow This

    Determination helps to master raps & elevation
    The mind is a gas tank in need of filling with tracks from a station


    I dunno...theres a quick thought

    you putting too many mutli syllable words in your sentences and
    your lines are too long and stretched out so they don't fl0w fluidly

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    Re: I Cant seem To Flow This

    Vallus Thats was a pretty sweet edit you dont mind if i touch it up abit and use it unless that would be biting

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