Contendors Match: ..Randomized.. vs Advisory

[Mr. Write]

fuck with excuses, we'd love you to leave now preferably anyday
It's obvious your not wanted, ad...you couldn't afford those anyway
you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness

vs

i'm fed up wit ya shit hoe, fall back n hop off.. fat ass clown
da WHOLE league culd wait on u.. and u'd still have us by a hundred pounds


Random came more consistant and dropped harder hitting punches. Some of them couldve been really dope if worded better - quest/adventure. Most of Ads were played and werent worded very well. it was obvious you rushed this verse.

v/ Random

[Flying Carcass]

advisory shut up with the excutesis

[Nemesis.]

bitch u beat me now, and you'll have champ match next week, face it whore
you'll have a title shot in no time... worth waiting for
Bitch u started off good, had a quick jump start to textin dude
N now ya careers stuck in overdrive.. While we jus driveover you

vs

fuck with excuses, we'd love you to leave now preferably anyday
It's obvious your not wanted, ad...you couldn't afford those anyway
you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness
LLL was your worst kid, but all? they noticed you had several
sent you on a quest 'n look, Adventured into modding his level


this was much weaker than expected..ad didn't really do his part, cuz he rushed his verse apparently. But ran was more consistent,..he takes this with ease imo.

v/random

[SoopSa]

fuck with excuses, we'd love you to leave now preferably anyday
It's obvious your not wanted, ad...you couldn't afford those anyway
you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness

vs

i'm fed up wit ya shit hoe, fall back n hop off.. fat ass clown
da WHOLE league culd wait on u.. and u'd still have us by a hundred pounds

Ran came consistent wit his verse wit nice punches..Ad you had nice punches but i really thought you woul'da came harder maybe next time you see him you'll be lookin for redemption and take it

V/random

[$pitacular]

This is ridiculous voting wtf... randomized your opener was a weak attempt at a wordplay, the flipping chrit bars punch wasn't worded right, seemed like you had to think about it to even see where you were going, like it shoulda been a ocean punch, the modding his level was just plain stupid, ass is grass didn't hit hard to me, the junior punch is iffy, the shit play is wack as fuck, and the closer doesn't even make sense.. lol @ 'loose'

Advisory had some decent concepts and fair wordking, he's getting robbed here, any vet would know... didn't like the no time punch, most of the rest was witty, the closer didn't rhyme so minus cool points for that but...


V/ advisory

[Dominance.]

Agreed with spit.

Randomized came played IMO,his motion sickness line looks really familiar to me as well but im not gunna take the time to look into it. Advisory just came weak as hell.
Battle was decent at best.

Randomized-Blah verse,some played shit..actually lots of played shit,poorly worded lines ruined most of your punches,that motion sickness line seems like its just been used not to long ago in 1-2 .Ad can look into more if we wants to.

Advisory-Below par drop on your part,dont give me that "keyed it up" bullshit, you have a week to drop.But some punches were nice, inconsistency was a problem.

V/Advisory

[FUNΞRΔL PR∅]

This is ridiculous voting wtf...

Advisory had some decent concepts and fair wordking, he's getting robbed here, any vet would know...


V/ advisory

^lol... $pit has spoken.. all votes shall change,in random order.(pun intended.)

[Uben. Sonned]

Allright I'll Come In Here And Vote...
This Wasn't A Strong Contendors Match...
I'm Sure You Both Had Reason's For Dropping Semi-Par.

Random-
Some Of Your Lines Were Kinda Weak, Let Alone A Few Were Quite Played...
When I Read A Contendors Match I Want To See Some Hard Hitting, Creative Punches...Wording Was Off On A Few Punches...

Advisory-
Well, You Were More Creative In My Mind With A Few Of Your Punches...
Opener Was Allright, But Could've Been Better...
Your Wording For The Most Part Was More On Point Then Randoms...
You Had More Witty Punches In My Eye...
Your Ender Would've Been Dope, Had Worded Better...

Vote-
Advisory...For Reasons Stated...

[-Shift-]

you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness
LLL was your worst kid, but all? they noticed you had several
sent you on a quest 'n look, Adventured into modding his level

vs.

i'm fed up wit ya shit hoe, fall back n hop off.. fat ass clown
da WHOLE league culd wait on u.. and u'd still have us by a hundred pounds
Bitch u started off good, had a quick jump start to textin dude
N now ya careers stuck in overdrive.. While we jus driveover you
this massacre will be a world matter, watch at how quick random die since
i'm sendin punches India that'll surpass any fucking bombing crisis



vote,...Ad. wtf is going on in here?

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

What u mean let it play out, there is nothin u can do.. Dominance's vote dnt count, the rest are legit.. I can say chrits was ahate vote, but I wnt dq it, another mod will have to

[®andom]

not in a bad way ad. not at all, what i meant was that was i wasn't gonna say anthing til its all over with.

[Vaskez]

quit chatting in a battle thread, Adv I cleaned it up, but you should be cleaning stuff like this up

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

Bitch I said u culd vote, not come in here swaying and shit.. Mods will determine what gets dq'd, not battlers

[Dominance.]

Why doesnt my vote count?

[Warming]

fuck with excuses, we'd love you to leave now preferably anyday
It's obvious your not wanted, ad...you couldn't afford those anyway
[kinda played on him, not a bad flip]
you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness
[personal didn't turn into a good punch]
LLL was your worst kid, but all? they noticed you had several
sent you on a quest 'n look, Adventured into modding his level
[wp was clever but not really any punch]
racists bitch, all you do is brag do us a favor 'n start showin it
of course your ass is grass...I'll be the first white boy mowing it
[playedish.. wording wasn't bad tho]
sick freak, its like candy from a baby how your wild with excitement
whoever said he wouldn't take junior overlooked his child enticements
[meh.. wording]
that's nothin to be proud, when go time your only known to touch base
you've went rounds with the best 'n it shows how you look so shitfaced
[meh.. poor rhyming and playedish]
So don't even approach, you only chance a bloody sight if you choose
coz you coulda left with a win, but really it's only right that you loose
[blah]

vs

i'm fed up wit ya shit hoe, fall back n hop off.. fat ass clown
da WHOLE league culd wait on u.. and u'd still have us by a hundred pounds
[meh/iight, these work beter if you kno hes actually fat]
im back in it now, up and down lately, not near consistant enuff to try me kid
u beatin me ? Nonsense.. < is exactly wat a voter wuld need to like ya shit
[meh/iight, don't dig this style punch too much]
bitch u beat me now, and you'll have champ match next week, face it whore
you'll have a title shot in no time... worth waiting for
[this was near dope actually]
Bitch u started off good, had a quick jump start to textin dude
N now ya careers stuck in overdrive.. While we jus driveover you
[iight, predictable but iight]
this massacre will be a world matter, watch at how quick random die since
i'm sendin punches India that'll surpass any fucking bombing crisis
[yea this wp is played... neat angle on the flip tho]
thought u was hot shit, u droppin dope ?? I'm sonnin with clout
and this'll be a FARE fight.. Since u pay for runnin your mouth
[iight flip]
Shulda I bring up ya history ? Why half da league aint want u around
Cuz your sucha man of your word... and that includes most of ours
[needs better wording]

v/ ad

random a lot of your punches have wit but not enough impact, wording needs more polishing especially on ideas like Adventuring.. which was actually pretty fresh.. a lot of your stuff was obviously played or flipped without good enough wording to justify reusing it

ads verse was mediocre by his standards but was consistently better, the title shot waiting was really well executed

jr.'s voting is pretty patchy right now, i swear i cringe everytime i read one of bullets breakdowns