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    "Are we dying?"

    My control over reality is my sanctity,
    so if you too lose your grasp sometimes,
    enter my grip at your own risk...
    But please, don’t force your way to the
    tips, for I need them to strip the skin
    from split lips; I speak, with sand paper
    edging my words smooth, so when these
    decisions of life or death fall dead on top
    of stress? … I find it hard to be motivated
    to even move; Look into my words… like
    telescopes facing black holes in the earths
    surface, and when these words also fall to
    times hands, is this poetry even worth it?

    Yes!..

    Free your mind; just strip the scalp clean,
    you’re not Jesus, nor are you a sinner,
    you have your own opinions and dreams.
    Whether religious, atheist or other on
    society’s tick boxes, you’re only an individual,
    so don’t think for other, think for your
    OWN logic; create a plate for you to make
    a stand, demand that they don’t chain your
    hands to their plans, or consider you anything
    but, Just a man

    I’m not speaking for youth, I’m speaking for
    humanity, this is neither political, nor social…
    Merely a forced war on reality, sanity rests in
    our survival, so don’t use old scriptures,
    instead? devise your own bible.


    So instead of asking you poets questions, just
    to see through your lying... i put the blade to
    our throats, and simply ask... are we dying?
    AI


    “¡Viva la Revolución!”

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    Re: "Are we dying?"

    Feed?
    AI


    “¡Viva la Revolución!”

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    Re: "Are we dying?"

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=366842
    Nath9, myself and Truth bringing a pretty enjoyable read.

    Really nice read dude, I felt that your wording was so well thought out. Flowed really fluently and clear throughout the whole read. And in the end, it was something I could consider a favorite of the month. Imagery was really visual here and your description was pretty much dead on when needed. Emotion was beautiful. And the whole story was great. Loved it, keep writing Ryan.

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    Cheers man, I'll get your feed done tonight.
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    “¡Viva la Revolución!”

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    im back on the site and im glad

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    only god can judge me

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    ...?

    In other words?
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