Electric Soul; Mariah and Griz

[Grizbear]

I'm musical epiphany to the
usual mysteries of a noose you
wore willingly when you created
and sedated a life younever lived
scolds - weeps; and now forms me
into a majestic symphony of rain and sand
where I wait and stand - where the drain
will vanish the heart of it's blood
scolds - weeps; and now forms me
into a majestic symphony of rain and sand
where I wait and stand - where the drain
will vanish the heart of it's blood

Utterance of electric radiance
amplified echoes cry as
clouds sing powerful chords and
energy rips my soul deep
Tree bark aches of destiny charred
I burn innocently in existence
transcended from my dwelling place
gaze upon my ionized discharge

[Grizbear]

rofl close this please

[LosFerra]

Lmfao at all the threadz, nice

[Dayvid Aimz]

Well....the rhyme scheme was very well-crafted....but the concept was kinda all over the place......and who wrote what....It'd been kinda good to know that much right??.....

loved the title name but you didn't get in deep with explaining it or elaborating on the theme of this piece


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[Grizbear]

NO! I don't want you to know who wrote which, so it will be unbiased.

[Twixn...]

Mariah is the first Griz 2nd ... my guess .

[Märtyr]

dick