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g`luk
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
lmfao at 30.. ok your choice
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There steps you havent climbed here, n ima disable your might
Only time dudes made the ladder, is when trying on his moms tights
This is a fight, n youve lost skill so theres no close calls
Id give you a tip, but youd only be screaming for it up to the balls
Setting you up for fall tonight, the question dudes provided a hitch
So Iono how you gonna see this cat fight, when only one of us is a bitch
Yeah ill kill em quick, this so called vets skill levels dying
Sure he`s terminal illness...but we wont discuss his fear of flying
Of course im trying to piss you off, but how badly it depends
I meant to get coms back-up, till i realised he had no friends
Im tidying up loose ends, but this fucking punk here aint hard
Only stepping upp com knows is with an instructional dvd and a leotard
Stab you with knife and shard, knock out your lights
If dudes no room for improvement...its coz he sucks wherever he writes
Your sparks aint bright, you cant make princes out of frogs
But Coms got animal magnetism, way he can only attract dogs
All seen ya pics, money? your not the type of kid to be known with any
Of course youve a chequered past..chavs are born rocking burberry
I aint big headed any, at all, in fact i could learn a few lessons
But if i took a leaf out of coms book, id just ruin his leaf tracing session
20.
g luk
Last edited by Big Question; October 19th, 2007 at 03:49 PM
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
dude i just got in its like qurter past 2 in the morning i;m drunk as fuck can i drop first thing in the morning? i had like 4 lines writtten before I went out.. I'ma goto bed and write in the morning
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you know what i was gonna say no extensions.
so ima say make sure you drop in the morning
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
I went one bar less so here's 18
Its been a while since the man tried so watch me rattle this fans pride
So fuck casting the first stone... coz this whole battle's a landslide
fucking faggot your plans died, the minute the hardest came back
I would tell you to eat your heart out.. but bitch its hardly a snack
Now he'll say I'm wack n' dried up, you smelly prick I'm the boss
He only sticks to his guns... coz the bitch has never been washed
Now your challenge is too steep...I've murdered a few geeks
You're the only dude I helped elevate...and gave up after two weeks
So this freak, I'm screwing with...come watch the voters boo and jeer
When the only real question is... what the FUCK you doing here?
Now this is where the feed goes: you're a bore.. coms a hero
But I'm not here to rock your boat...bitch I'm launching torpedoes
Now I'm writing hungover, coz I wont no show like he reckoned
This fucking fag put in the hours, and all he got back was a second
We've got nothing in common, I'ma kill this bitch coz I never play
Only thing running in the blood, is me in my getaway
Bitch I'm wrecking ya rating.. and you all know I'm never hating...
...but if this dudes repping England now... then I'm fucking emigrating...
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k lets get sum votes. i cant decide which bar to take out really, so if you wanna add another before the first vote go for it.
pz
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
There steps you havent climbed here, n ima disable your might
Only time dudes made the ladder, is when trying on his moms tights
Stab you with knife and shard, knock out your lights
If dudes no room for improvement...its coz he sucks wherever he writes
^^haha but I think you missed out hte word "got"
All seen ya pics, money? your not the type of kid to be known with any
Of course youve a chequered past..chavs are born rocking burberry
the concepts were there my dude, apart from that step up one - man that's FL level played - but the wording let you down. Oh and I didnt like the closer concept either
vs.
fucking faggot your plans died, the minute the hardest came back
I would tell you to eat your heart out.. but bitch its hardly a snack
Now your challenge is too steep...I've murdered a few geeks
You're the only dude I helped elevate...and gave up after two weeks
^^lol
Now I'm writing hungover, coz I wont no show like he reckoned
This fucking fag put in the hours, and all he got back was a second
^^nice wp
question line was real basic and played
too close to call, I'll have another look later
This is a fight, n youve lost skill so theres no close calls
Id give you a tip, but youd only be screaming for it up to the balls
lol
Setting you up for fall tonight, the question dudes provided a hitch
So Iono how you gonna see this cat fight, when only one of us is a bitch
fucking nice
Stab you with knife and shard, knock out your lights
If dudes no room for improvement...its coz he sucks wherever he writes
excellent flip, best 'room for improvement' punch yet
Your sparks aint bright, you cant make princes out of frogs
But Coms got animal magnetism, way he can only attract dogs
well worded
damn... you definitely have grown in both wording and concepts.. still some weak lines but overall worth reading.. keep it up good drop
vs
Its been a while since the man tried so watch me rattle this fans pride
So fuck casting the first stone... coz this whole battle's a landslide
ok but weak for an opener
fucking faggot your plans died, the minute the hardest came back
I would tell you to eat your heart out.. but bitch its hardly a snack
lmao.. wording could have been sharper though
Now he'll say I'm wack n' dried up, you smelly prick I'm the boss
He only sticks to his guns... coz the bitch has never been washed
ok
Now your challenge is too steep...I've murdered a few geeks
You're the only dude I helped elevate...and gave up after two weeks
Now this is where the feed goes: you're a bore.. coms a hero
But I'm not here to rock your boat...bitch I'm launching torpedoes
dope
Now I'm writing hungover, coz I wont no show like he reckoned
This fucking fag put in the hours, and all he got back was a second
very nice.
welcome back COM.. keep working the wording though you've done better.. your concepts are still hard as fuck though, props. You took this, even though your quotables were only four lines more than his, they were much harder hitting.
v/COM
There steps you havent climbed here, n ima disable your might
Only time dudes made the ladder, is when trying on his moms tights
dont like it
This is a fight, n youve lost skill so theres no close calls
Id give you a tip, but youd only be screaming for it up to the balls
ehh
Setting you up for fall tonight, the question dudes provided a hitch
So Iono how you gonna see this cat fight, when only one of us is a bitch
ok
Yeah ill kill em quick, this so called vets skill levels dying
Sure he`s terminal illness...but we wont discuss his fear of flying
stupid punch who cares if he fears flying
Of course im trying to piss you off, but how badly it depends
I meant to get coms back-up, till i realised he had no friends
this is aight
Im tidying up loose ends, but this fucking punk here aint hard
Only stepping upp com knows is with an instructional dvd and a leotard
wack
Stab you with knife and shard, knock out your lights
If dudes no room for improvement...its coz he sucks wherever he writes
cool
Your sparks aint bright, you cant make princes out of frogs
But Coms got animal magnetism, way he can only attract dogs
ok
All seen ya pics, money? your not the type of kid to be known with any
Of course youve a chequered past..chavs are born rocking burberry
i dont get it wtf
I aint big headed any, at all, in fact i could learn a few lessons
But if i took a leaf out of coms book, id just ruin his leaf tracing session
wack
vs
Its been a while since the man tried so watch me rattle this fans pride
So fuck casting the first stone... coz this whole battle's a landslide
ok
fucking faggot your plans died, the minute the hardest came back
I would tell you to eat your heart out.. but bitch its hardly a snack
ehh
Now he'll say I'm wack n' dried up, you smelly prick I'm the boss
He only sticks to his guns... coz the bitch has never been washed
ok
Now your challenge is too steep...I've murdered a few geeks
You're the only dude I helped elevate...and gave up after two weeks
lol
So this freak, I'm screwing with...come watch the voters boo and jeer
When the only real question is... what the FUCK you doing here?
ha played though
Now this is where the feed goes: you're a bore.. coms a hero
But I'm not here to rock your boat...bitch I'm launching torpedoes
ok
Now I'm writing hungover, coz I wont no show like he reckoned
This fucking fag put in the hours, and all he got back was a second
hahaha nice
We've got nothing in common, I'ma kill this bitch coz I never play
Only thing running in the blood, is me in my getaway
na
Bitch I'm wrecking ya rating.. and you all know I'm never hating...
...but if this dudes repping England now... then I'm fucking emigrating...
ok
i think com took this pretty handidly. ? had a lot of wack stuff in his verse. the concepts are witty but they aren't punches. just corny shit. com actually had some cool punches so i think he won this one.
v/ com
There steps you havent climbed here, n ima disable your might
Only time dudes made the ladder, is when trying on his moms tights
meh
This is a fight, n youve lost skill so theres no close calls
Id give you a tip, but youd only be screaming for it up to the balls
meh
Setting you up for fall tonight, the question dudes provided a hitch
So Iono how you gonna see this cat fight, when only one of us is a bitch
ha, ok
Yeah ill kill em quick, this so called vets skill levels dying
Sure he`s terminal illness...but we wont discuss his fear of flying
meh/iight
Of course im trying to piss you off, but how badly it depends
I meant to get coms back-up, till i realised he had no friends
this is aight
Im tidying up loose ends, but this fucking punk here aint hard
Only stepping upp com knows is with an instructional dvd and a leotard
lame, but rofl.. funny
Stab you with knife and shard, knock out your lights
If dudes no room for improvement...its coz he sucks wherever he writes
coo
Your sparks aint bright, you cant make princes out of frogs
But Coms got animal magnetism, way he can only attract dogs
ok
All seen ya pics, money? your not the type of kid to be known with any
Of course youve a chequered past..chavs are born rocking burberry
i saw vaskez say something about this... n i'm still lost =[
I aint big headed any, at all, in fact i could learn a few lessons
But if i took a leaf out of coms book, id just ruin his leaf tracing session
meh
vs
Its been a while since the man tried so watch me rattle this fans pride
So fuck casting the first stone... coz this whole battle's a landslide
meh
fucking faggot your plans died, the minute the hardest came back
I would tell you to eat your heart out.. but bitch its hardly a snack
meh
Now he'll say I'm wack n' dried up, you smelly prick I'm the boss
He only sticks to his guns... coz the bitch has never been washed
ok
Now your challenge is too steep...I've murdered a few geeks
You're the only dude I helped elevate...and gave up after two weeks
lol.. personal
So this freak, I'm screwing with...come watch the voters boo and jeer
When the only real question is... what the FUCK you doing here?
played on him, just the idea
Now this is where the feed goes: you're a bore.. coms a hero
But I'm not here to rock your boat...bitch I'm launching torpedoes
iight
Now I'm writing hungover, coz I wont no show like he reckoned
This fucking fag put in the hours, and all he got back was a second
haha
We've got nothing in common, I'ma kill this bitch coz I never play
Only thing running in the blood, is me in my getaway
meh
Bitch I'm wrecking ya rating.. and you all know I'm never hating...
...but if this dudes repping England now... then I'm fucking emigrating...
iight @ best
imo a close battle kinda
but as u can tell V/com
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There steps you havent climbed here, n ima disable your might
Only time dudes made the ladder, is when trying on his moms tights
Ehh... not feelin it
This is a fight, n youve lost skill so theres no close calls
Id give you a tip, but youd only be screaming for it up to the balls
Lol, no homo
Setting you up for fall tonight, the question dudes provided a hitch
So Iono how you gonna see this cat fight, when only one of us is a bitch
Creative
Yeah ill kill em quick, this so called vets skill levels dying
Sure he`s terminal illness...but we wont discuss his fear of flying
So-so
Of course im trying to piss you off, but how badly it depends
I meant to get coms back-up, till i realised he had no friends
Wasn't really feelin this one
Im tidying up loose ends, but this fucking punk here aint hard
Only stepping upp com knows is with an instructional dvd and a leotard
Funny
Stab you with knife and shard, knock out your lights
If dudes no room for improvement...its coz he sucks wherever he writes
I liked this one, good flip
Your sparks aint bright, you cant make princes out of frogs
But Coms got animal magnetism, way he can only attract dogs
Ehh... too plain
All seen ya pics, money? your not the type of kid to be known with any
Of course youve a chequered past..chavs are born rocking burberry
Hm??
I aint big headed any, at all, in fact i could learn a few lessons
But if i took a leaf out of coms book, id just ruin his leaf tracing session
Ehh... wasn't really feelin the wording here
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COM
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Its been a while since the man tried so watch me rattle this fans pride
So fuck casting the first stone... coz this whole battle's a landslide
Pretty good flip
fucking faggot your plans died, the minute the hardest came back
I would tell you to eat your heart out.. but bitch its hardly a snack
Too simple
Now he'll say I'm wack n' dried up, you smelly prick I'm the boss
He only sticks to his guns... coz the bitch has never been washed
Lol, another good flip
Now your challenge is too steep...I've murdered a few geeks
You're the only dude I helped elevate...and gave up after two weeks
Pretty harsh
So this freak, I'm screwing with...come watch the voters boo and jeer
When the only real question is... what the FUCK you doing here?
This type of concept is played on him
Now this is where the feed goes: you're a bore.. coms a hero
But I'm not here to rock your boat...bitch I'm launching torpedoes
Made me chuckle
Now I'm writing hungover, coz I wont no show like he reckoned
This fucking fag put in the hours, and all he got back was a second
Creative
We've got nothing in common, I'ma kill this bitch coz I never play
Only thing running in the blood, is me in my getaway
Ehh...
Bitch I'm wrecking ya rating.. and you all know I'm never hating...
...but if this dudes repping England now... then I'm fucking emigrating...
Decent
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This is a fight, n youve lost skill so theres no close calls
Id give you a tip, but youd only be screaming for it up to the balls
Stab you with knife and shard, knock out your lights
If dudes no room for improvement...its coz he sucks wherever he writes
VS
Now he'll say I'm wack n' dried up, you smelly prick I'm the boss
He only sticks to his guns... coz the bitch has never been washed
Now this is where the feed goes: you're a bore.. coms a hero
But I'm not here to rock your boat...bitch I'm launching torpedoes
Now I'm writing hungover, coz I wont no show like he reckoned
This fucking fag put in the hours, and all he got back was a second
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VOTE: COM
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