Probation Match: Ghostwriter Vs. Gallo Negro

[Sgt Spliff]

ok now jus waiting on what M~M has to say, are you signing out El Gallo?

[Sgt Spliff]

ok now jus waiting on what M~M has to say, are you signing out El Gallo?

[KempoMRK]

Shit my verse's need work, they seem to be coming off dull,
so this week I’m knuckling down - an' fracturing ya skull.
El gallo negro, you aint black, fake ass fag I’m sendin' ya to hell,
n' M~M fucked up ya name in the title - jus so i could give you the EL.

vs

i shit talk about you many times cause your a faggit whore
so your gonna impose your will on me...but it sucks that your poor
im a nice guy sonz but your making me want to see you dead
so your lucky ima pacifist right through your fucking head

Ghost came decent. The knuckling down bar was tight, simple but it hit hard. Same deal with the El bar. Gallo had the will bar, that was nice, hit hard. And pacifist was dope as hell. I thought Ghost took this at first, but after a re-read I think that Gallo did. It was close though, but Gallo just edged it.

v/ Gallo

[phlymo]

this is fucking close to me. ghost was kinda dull for the most part with a decent 'el' concept that worked ok but wasn't exactly woah. gallo or whatever had two good bars, the impose the will (which could have been doper, but still good) and the pacifist wordplay. unfortuantely the rest of his verse was complete and utter garbage. genuinely awful. i'm half considering giving it to ghost for trying and never being as wack as gallo was at points, but i think i have to give the win to gallo, especially since it is a probation match and he showed the most potential. still, turning up in a probation match and saying some cocky shit like how lazy you were this week was really stupid. especially since mm is only keeping around those who work to their best. even though you won i wouldn't be that shocked if he got harsh to be honest. make an effort in future man.
v/gallo

[Sgt Spliff]

thanks for the votes, the last two votes are what ive been wanting, props for the good feed

[Big Question]

Shit my verse's need work, they seem to be coming off dull,
so this week I’m knuckling down - an' fracturing ya skull.
^^THIS WAS A DECENT IDEA, MAYBE NOT THAT HARSH BUT IT WAS WITTY




I’m chargin' down your face, so we all know I’ll make this cat pay,
see I’m fast For Words - while your rap carear'll NEVER go that way.
^^OK, YEAH THIS WAS DECENT WORDPLAY, AGAIN NOT TOO HARSH BUT OK
i know you love me son, but I aint love you so step off or get whored fast,
coz if you wanted to be like me so much - you'd be kicking your own ass.
^^YEH, I GOT THIS IT WAS A GOOD IDEA, BUT THE WORDING WAS A BIT OFF, MAYBE USING SOMTHIN DIFF TO KICK YA OWN ASS WOULDA BEEN A HARSHER COMPARISON IE. A PERSONAL, OR JUST SOMTHIN MORE CREATIVE
Shits easy, for me this victory’s gonna come fast kid,
see i'm jus kicking back - n' fuckin' crippling this bastard.
^^AGAIN THE IDEA WAS THERE BUT IT WAS A BIT BASIC, AGAIN A HARSHER COMPARISON WOULD BEEN BETTER MAYBE SOMETHIN ALONG THE LINES OF KICKING BACK/RELAXING SOMETHIN A BIT HARSHER.
El gallo negro, you aint black, fake ass fag I’m sendin' ya to hell,
n' M~M fucked up ya name in the title - jus so i could give you the EL.
^^WORDING MADE THIS HARD TO GET IN MY OPINION, MAYBE SOMTHIN MORE ALONG THE LINES OF "So he put me against you...so youd get the El back"..
IONO, JUST SOMTHIN A BIT HARSHER
Gallos a E-thug, a text hustler, too bad you cant read whore,
an' you could context<-- but your shits never been in that before.
^^CON CONCEPTS ARE PRETTY PLAYED SO REALLY YOUD STRUGLE TO MAKE THIS DOPE ANYWAY, ALSO THIS WASNT WORDED AS GOOD AS THE ONE I SAW.
Gho$t's coming out swingin', i can tell you should never be rappin',
coz your the only person that has your life flash before ya eyes...
...n' nothing happens.
^^OK, IT CAME OFF A LIL BLAND WITH THE WORDING BUT IT WAS A GOOD CONCEPT, I DO HOWEVER THINK IVE SEEN THOSE BEFORE
We aint friends but I’m down to be nice, so lets smoke some chronic,
n' we'll wipe the slate clean - after your head stops bleeding on it.
^^OK CLOSER

vs

this match was a mistaked M said it believe
cause putting me here like you in the league
^^HUH?...NOT SURE ABOUT THIS
im gonna merk but the votes can be iffy at times
in this battle you'll get framed..witha nice chalk outline
^^DECENT WORDPLAY, OK PUNCH
quit bitching about this whole line limit im sick of your ass
doesn't matter if your dropping 10-20 lines your still dropping trash
^^BASIC BUT A DECENT HIT
talking shit about me you can't run, or hide , or escape your fate
so this week putting my hand down..and brusing the shit out of your face
^^OK, A BIT LIKE GHOSTS OPENER, BUT NOT AS WITTY IMO
i shit talk about you many times cause your a faggit whore
so your gonna impose your will on me...but it sucks that your poor
^^THINK FEEBLE USED A DOPE WILL LINE RECENTLY, THIS ISNT EXACTLY PLAYED BUT YOUR USAGE WASNT GREAT
im a nice guy sonz but your making me want to see you dead
so your lucky ima pacifist right through your fucking head
^^GOOD WORDPLAY
your making me furious kidz your really not even close to a star
im probally gonna go savage on you kinda like how your people are
^^NAH, DIDNT LIKE THIS



OK YEH IMMA VOTE GALLO. THIS WAS MAD CLOSE TO ME THO, AND THE ONLY REASON IS COZ ALTHOUGH GALLO HAD WORSE CONCEPTS THEY WERE MORE DIRECT AND GHOST I THINK SOME OF YOUR CONCEPTS CAME OF A LIL BIT BLANDER THAN THEY COULD HAVE DUE TO WORDING.

VOTE GALLO.

P.S GHOST, i only scrutinized your verse more coz u wanted feed so thats how i saw it

[Sgt Spliff]

^yep thanks, wording would make me ALOT better lol

[Doug Graves]

v/ gallo