PS: Com Vs. Phlymo

[Mystery~Murdera]

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[Erupt]

hey, 20 lines..

[phlymo]

20 sounds cool. good luck mate


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=306320
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post4983390
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...27#post4983427

[Erupt]

Sorry only had time for ten.. no motivation at all

Needed an extension but you ain't been dope since december dude
I didn't spend ages on my verse, it just took me ages to remember you
So watch a title be retained, we're here to separate the boys from men
Coz Phly fell off so bad.... the bitch is elligible for ROY again
But yo my target is steep n' watch the votes thrown at your feet
Coz there's my haters, your dickriders.... n' the fact you wrote for a week
So geek we'll write for our pride, or meet.. and fight it outside
Whether its real or just battling.. either way you're outlined
Boring bitch this bouts mine,
and you'd normally have no chance coz I'ma higher weight
But I needed motivation... n' you've got no character to annihilate

[phlymo]

ah man i was kinda looking forward to going twenty, anyhow, good luck


We’re both from the UK, but you’re the one who’s dumb as shit
Fuck finding common ground, it’s way more likely he’ll be under it
Com dropped heat to win last season, I was glad to see him earn clout
U gotta be stoked, cos judging by that drop your fire’s already burnt out
Com posts up his lines, and every battler’s shocked after friend
Dope ones throughout ya verses…n’ the other heads just laughed at them
Now ya bitching about voting rings, but your example’s rare see
Com opts to drop all accusations - in the semis when he can’t win fairly
It’s a crew war in the chat thread, but SC don’t look stable tonight
When tribes clash, apache versus…all com’s ever been able to write

[Aeral]

Needed an extension but you ain't been dope since december dude
I didn't spend ages on my verse, it just took me ages to remember you
lol. decent
So watch a title be retained, we're here to separate the boys from men
Coz Phly fell off so bad.... the bitch is elligible for ROY again
decent
But yo my target is steep n' watch the votes thrown at your feet
Coz there's my haters, your dickriders.... n' the fact you wrote for a week
decent again
So geek we'll write for our pride, or meet.. and fight it outside
Whether its real or just battling.. either way you're outlined
ehh
Boring bitch this bouts mine,
and you'd normally have no chance coz I'ma higher weight
But I needed motivation... n' you've got no character to annihilate
lol, decent

Vs.


We’re both from the UK, but you’re the one who’s dumb as shit
Fuck finding common ground, it’s way more likely he’ll be under it
haha
Com dropped heat to win last season, I was glad to see him earn clout
U gotta be stoked, cos judging by that drop your fire’s already burnt out
pretty decent
Com posts up his lines, and every battler’s shocked after friend
Dope ones throughout ya verses…n’ the other heads just laughed at them
lmao, dope wordplay
Now ya bitching about voting rings, but your example’s rare see
Com opts to drop all accusations - in the semis when he can’t win fairly
decent
It’s a crew war in the chat thread, but SC don’t look stable tonight
When tribes clash, apache versus…all com’s ever been able to write
it was ight.

v- phlymo, i've seen com drop better, don't think he stressed this battle too much, well idk, but i seen him drop better.. he had decent lines nothing hit too hard. Phlymo had that throughout wordplay that i thought was dope and hard hitting and that common ground was good too.


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=306335

^ that's my battle, it was a no-show this week, so i'd appreciate it if you guys can hit up with some feedback.

[Chrit.]

well this was wayy closer than i expected..

com had the ROY, and outlined punches

phlymo had the throughout and closer...

fuck... this was close as shit...

I'll just give it to the punch that got the best reaction from me
and that was the outline punch

v/ com

barely

[Richard Parker]

Wow, I didn't know phylmo could come that witty. In some parts, anyway, he showed real potential. Com half assed this, kinda like I did against auto. thank god SOMEBODY (phylmo) put some effort into preseason. in most of the battles I've read, doesn't look like many newer heads care.

Needed an extension but you ain't been dope since december dude
I didn't spend ages on my verse, it just took me ages to remember you
ok.. the concept is new, but the GENERAL concept is old.. the whole repeat teachnique, ya know.
So watch a title be retained, we're here to separate the boys from men
Coz Phly fell off so bad.... the bitch is elligible for ROY again
sorry, i don't get it
But yo my target is steep n' watch the votes thrown at your feet
Coz there's my haters, your dickriders.... n' the fact you wrote for a week
Lol. nice
So geek we'll write for our pride, or meet.. and fight it outside
Whether its real or just battling.. either way you're outlined
blah, filler
Boring bitch this bouts mine,
and you'd normally have no chance coz I'ma higher weight
But I needed motivation... n' you've got no character to annihilate
blah


We’re both from the UK, but you’re the one who’s dumb as shit
Fuck finding common ground, it’s way more likely he’ll be under it
blah, ok
Com dropped heat to win last season, I was glad to see him earn clout
U gotta be stoked, cos judging by that drop your fire’s already burnt out
Nice...witty..
Com posts up his lines, and every battler’s shocked after friend
Dope ones throughout ya verses…n’ the other heads just laughed at them
Good wordplay, took me an extra read to catch it actually.
Now ya bitching about voting rings, but your example’s rare see
Com opts to drop all accusations - in the semis when he can’t win fairly
ok
It’s a crew war in the chat thread, but SC don’t look stable tonight
When tribes clash, apache versus…all com’s ever been able to write
Meh. wordplay was shaky at best.

Overall, vote- phylmo.