Cry/Nash (1-2) vs Tae Profit (2-1)

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[Cody Nash]

who's profit?
he's a whore in spandex.. more like peter pans bitch ..
.. poor kid, on second thought. Wendy ever have a dick?
you're such a whiney baby, girlfriend dumped you. she's gone
and when you try to collar, you're just something to puke on
word, dillusional fuck..caffine, nicotine, bitch is hooked
.. cuz when tae coffee gives the cigarettes mean looks
yea, i'd like popularity ..or to be noticed more than less
but when i talked about smashin' his rep ..
.. he asked if i was hittin' a bench press
and yes, i get no profit off'a you. your verse'll stink
people sleep on your shit so much..
..their eyelids move backwards to blink
i'm a bully, shits witty right? even my turds are excited!
but when you take shit....your whole family gets reunited
i'm way the fuck out of your league ..so is everyone else
so $pit & M~M better cut the bitch - before he kills HIMSELF
the kid can't fuck women, he don't recognize sexual signs..
cuz when he trys to Cop a feel ..he thinks he's comitting a crime
u need to get better kid, nobody sucks more queer
RB put signs all over cuz u've been missing for years
gunplay, bullets, Losses and wins, gays, it's all played
can't help talkin' bout his death tho..
..cuz we draw blanks on his name

20 lines. match me

[Tae Profit]

ahh, ok...spit and m, ya do kno that we already battled right...? Anyway, aight Nash round 3? ill match.

[Tae Profit]

-20-...on the spot.

You bout to lose,
But dont fret the laws of physics say ya rep wont decline
see only what goes up must come down, so ya shyt shud b fine
your a motherfucking, ducking, bitch, ho why even debate
battle?...this nigga wouldnt hurt a flee....cuz he can relate
u got some promise in them gay rhymes ya just unbalanced
cuz 1 peak in those homo bars show u gotta strippa talent
Round 3? Damn,............. i hate to continually kill a friend
nah, id love to give u everlasting death,
........but every good thing must eventually come to an end
fuckin rook, tryin to become an elite vet, u need work at that
cuz ya bridging the gap...from RB, LLL, and text rap to wack
This niggaz Always beggin for ghost writers n recievin no love
cuz Kotex wont stop the bleeding for u,...like it usually does
ya rhymes got the potential to shoot for the stars when ya carol
yea cuz ya flows are touching....the bottom of the barrel
it aint personal, just read above ya avy so i dropped this speech
er'body hates fake niggaz,
..........................so this is just to help u practice what u preach
Nash is ass, straight trash, justa ho everyone wonders who wud fear
that aint ya record, its the only place u suck at more than here
ya not sonning me nigga, wont happen, imma leave this ho crushed
but ill b sure ya gurls ridin me when i nut...justa get ya hopes up

this ma nigga tho. good luck.

[Cody Nash]

upp . and i just voted on every existing battle in LLL methinks ..so, do i really need links and such? lol, BUMP ..

[Jay Walker]

for real... this shit is close.


i think tae came alot more consistent, even though neither of you had to many real hard hitters... and cry had my favorite line of the battle [ that cut yaself line] so i dunno. right now my guts telling me tae, but cry... you're really coming along man. you're starting to realize wordplay, and thats dope, but you need to connect it better. i thought the wendy line was dumb, just cause it was really corny. but the next two lines you spit could have been really nice. you just arent connecting them right. like talking coffee then going cigs, you need to make a better correlation with the coffee part, instead of jumping to something that makes you cough, feel me? if you could have connected your wordplay better, i really think you would have taken this bout, but because of that, i think tae JJJJJUUUUSSSSTTTT edged this one out. im glad to see you guys improving though. keep it up fellas.

[Vaskez]

you're such a whiney baby, girlfriend dumped you. she's gone
and when you try to collar, you're just something to puke on
and yes, i get no profit off'a you. your verse'll stink
people sleep on your shit so much..
..their eyelids move backwards to blink
i'm way the fuck out of your league ..so is everyone else
so $pit & M~M better cut the bitch - before he kills HIMSELF
u need to get better kid, nobody sucks more queer
RB put signs all over cuz u've been missing for years


I can see ya had a lot of good ideas but it's a typical case of being unable to word them...yet. Like the cop a feel line was a good concept but needed much better wording. That comes with time, no worries.


vs.


You bout to lose,
But dont fret the laws of physics say ya rep wont decline
see only what goes up must come down, so ya shyt shud b fine
^^hella played but good enough flip, liked it
your a motherfucking, ducking, bitch, ho why even debate
battle?...this nigga wouldnt hurt a flee....cuz he can relate
fuckin rook, tryin to become an elite vet, u need work at that
cuz ya bridging the gap...from RB, LLL, and text rap to wack
ya rhymes got the potential to shoot for the stars when ya carol
yea cuz ya flows are touching....the bottom of the barrel


in the end as Jay said it was extremely close, but I also gotta give it to Tae, just had a few less gay concepts and also Cry had almost all single-syllable rhymes which sounds wack and is a bit basic

v/Tae

[Cody Nash]

upp ..0-2

[Cody Nash]

don't sleep you fucks..

[Cody Nash]

lmfao @ this whole battle being decided on 2 peoples votes ..this leagues voting system is fucked.

[Automatic.]

This is close. Nash, i see ur elevating alot in this text shit man. Ur using wordplay and pretty creative concepts. But ur wording is killing u.. that just comes with time and experience though. Tae, i see ur elevating alot too. U didnt have any wordplay, but ur concepts were much more direct and ur wording is getting better too. There wasn't really any punches in this battle that were that great, but i think Tae slightly pulled this battle off with his consistency. If Nash worded his punches with his wordplay better, he wouldve took this.. but tae was just harsher. Great to see u two elevating though, keep it up.

v/ Tae

[Mystery~Murdera]

nah i left this open to get more votes...

[Cody Nash]

god damnit .. 3-0