M~M (2-0) vs Phlymo (3-0)

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[Mystery~Murdera]

this could be good...

[phlymo]

hey M~M, how many you wanna go? i'm thinking 10-14.

[Mystery~Murdera]

yeah, that sounds good...

[phlymo]

alright i went 12 mate, good luck.

U screwed up the league and ya lines, I regret it when I read ‘em
But fuck ruein’ the day – you’ve practically ruined the whole season
Ya recent verses were wack, I could win with just a few blows
If my head’s in the clouds – it’s cos this myst has stooped to new lows
This battle should get mad votes, peeps enjoy it when I key
And M~M’s style is known to turn heads…off joining the league
I’ll prove you ain’t the dopest and expose all your fucking flaws
If there’s a chink in my armour, the rest of Asia must be stuck in yours
You’re like a teacher to some, but they couldn’t spot a good verse
But now they all can Sensei…loss is gonna make ya rec look worse
You got a real man to help out when league pressures were growing
And now ya spit’s right-hand man…he’s got another fist worth throwing

[Mystery~Murdera]

not a no show... I just got in gonna shower, eat,
then I'm posting. Cool with you P???

[Mystery~Murdera]

ok roy... yeah so...



I guess that... dumb lucks leavin... why's this poor cunt breathin
& WHO THE FUCK...
gets happy about being rookie of the year.. in a four month season?!
I'm not ceasin, i'm the one to believe in so know I lie little
if you're on a playoff run... pfft... bitch you better buy a bicycle
If i'm brittle then u're broken... i'm not racist i've said it before
but UK?????!! not a chance... his topicals are MUCH better than yours!
I give u a lesson, it's for ur own good - don't act hard, u aint tough
if this is what it means to be phly, i see why airlines are goin bankrupt
get it kid? shape up but nice wordplay & since it's holiday time...
maybe u should PassOver the rest of Feeble's throw away rhymes
& don't stray from the line, despite how i spite ya I actually like ya
hell... I ain't had P on my dick this much since I was in diapers

[Jay Walker]

Ya recent verses were wack, I could win with just a few blows
If my head’s in the clouds – it’s cos this myst has stooped to new lows

I’ll prove you ain’t the dopest and expose all your fucking flaws
If there’s a chink in my armour, the rest of Asia must be stuck in yours

those were cool. the rest were to obvious, and i've seen sensei alot. but just some friendly advice ply... you keep coming with the same shit, just different words. like your opener. i think you're getting to stuck on one style, which is making your shit really predictable and really, really taking away its impact... atleast for me.


vs.


m. what can i say. fucka quotable, you came wit it here. only line i thought wasnt up to the rest was your opener, and it was even cool for the personal tip.


vote mm

[Vaskez]

Ya recent verses were wack, I could win with just a few blows
If my head’s in the clouds – it’s cos this myst has stooped to new lows
This battle should get mad votes, peeps enjoy it when I key
And M~M’s style is known to turn heads…off joining the league
I’ll prove you ain’t the dopest and expose all your fucking flaws
If there’s a chink in my armour, the rest of Asia must be stuck in yours
You got a real man to help out when league pressures were growing
And now ya spit’s right-hand man…he’s got another fist worth throwing

lol, good shit


vs.

I guess that... dumb lucks leavin... why's this poor cunt breathin
& WHO THE FUCK...
gets happy about being rookie of the year.. in a four month season?!
I'm not ceasin, i'm the one to believe in so know I lie little
if you're on a playoff run... pfft... bitch you better buy a bicycle
get it kid? shape up but nice wordplay & since it's holiday time...
maybe u should PassOver the rest of Feeble's throw away rhymes


wow I predicted MM but seems Phly pulled it off here. To be honest I wasn't feelin the P on dick line and the phly wordplay<- that one was just too obvious from MM. Phly came with some fresh shit

v/Phly

[Mystery~Murdera]

Ok... 1-1 up

[schizmatic]

Woops edit

Ya recent verses were wack, I could win with just a few blows
If my head’s in the clouds – it’s cos this myst has stooped to new lows
I’ll prove you ain’t the dopest and expose all your fucking flaws
If there’s a chink in my armour, the rest of Asia must be stuck in yours

This battle should get mad votes, peeps enjoy it when I key
And M~M’s style is known to turn heads…off joining the league
^would have quoted but i just didnt like the way it sounded

vs

I'm not ceasin, i'm the one to believe in so know I lie little
if you're on a playoff run... pfft... bitch you better buy a bicycle
If i'm brittle then u're broken... i'm not racist i've said it before
but UK?????!! not a chance... his topicals are MUCH better than yours!
I give u a lesson, it's for ur own good - don't act hard, u aint tough
if this is what it means to be phly, i see why airlines are goin bankrupt
get it kid? shape up but nice wordplay & since it's holiday time...
maybe u should PassOver the rest of Feeble's throw away rhymes
& don't stray from the line, despite how i spite ya I actually like ya
hell... I ain't had P on my dick this much since I was in diapers

v/MM.

Killed it

DONt sleep

[Tae Profit]

battle was close with mad quoteables so ill just vote by which lines weren't dumb dope.

Lines i didnt like:

Phly - U screwed up the league and ya lines, I regret it when I read ‘em
But fuck ruein’ the day – you’ve practically ruined the whole season

MM - I'm not ceasin, i'm the one to believe in so know I lie little
if you're on a playoff run... pfft... bitch you better buy a bicycle
- & don't stray from the line, despite how i spite ya I actually like ya
hell... I ain't had P on my dick this much since I was in diapers

and i didnt really like the UK line, the concept of puttin names in as sumthin else then flippin it into a personal between the competitor and the name is played to me and ive only been here 1 season...anyway close shyt but i gotta go Phlymo for havin a few more lines i liked. good job.

[Mystery~Murdera]

2-2

[Untold.]

U screwed up the league and ya lines, I regret it when I read ‘em
But fuck ruein’ the day – you’ve practically ruined the whole season
Ya recent verses were wack, I could win with just a few blows
If my head’s in the clouds – it’s cos this myst has stooped to new lows
This battle should get mad votes, peeps enjoy it when I key
And M~M’s style is known to turn heads…off joining the league
I’ll prove you ain’t the dopest and expose all your fucking flaws
If there’s a chink in my armour, the rest of Asia must be stuck in yours

vs.

I guess that... dumb lucks leavin... why's this poor cunt breathin
& WHO THE FUCK...
gets happy about being rookie of the year.. in a four month season?!
I give u a lesson, it's for ur own good - don't act hard, u aint tough
if this is what it means to be phly, i see why airlines are goin bankrupt
get it kid? shape up but nice wordplay & since it's holiday time...
maybe u should PassOver the rest of Feeble's throw away rhymes
& don't stray from the line, despite how i spite ya I actually like ya
hell... I ain't had P on my dick this much since I was in diapers

well, this ishy was close as hell for me. hmm.. i enjoy'd both the verses but both seem'd a little off at times and what not. but i think i'm a go with phly. felt his verse had the harder impact. mm, you came dope, but i'ono. there was something i just wasn't feelin about ur verse. good job to both.

v/ phlymo

[Awdo Grafh.]

I give u a lesson, it's for ur own good - don't act hard, u aint tough
if this is what it means to be phly, i see why airlines are goin bankrupt
get it kid? shape up but nice wordplay & since it's holiday time...
maybe u should PassOver the rest of Feeble's throw away rhymes
& don't stray from the line, despite how i spite ya I actually like ya
hell... I ain't had P on my dick this much since I was in diapers

v.

This battle should get mad votes, peeps enjoy it when I key
And M~M’s style is known to turn heads…off joining the league
I’ll prove you ain’t the dopest and expose all your fucking flaws
If there’s a chink in my armour, the rest of Asia must be stuck in yours

v/MM, good battle though.