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  1. #1

    FreeStyle FEEDBACK ALL

    I write cos I'm confused, an upcoming struggling youth,
    Been through so much abuse I've actually tied the noose,
    My mind is my proof cos I used to drive myself crazy,
    Routines running round my head and the devil enslaved me,
    I was asking him to slay me and end my pain,
    Since I've actually come of age things just aint been the same,
    Still love rain still waiting for my reign and I'm waiting so patient,
    Just to here them say "Heres comes Bez, dam that man the greatest",
    Not meaning to sound byist but I cant resist my will,
    I've created more threads than a barber on sugar hill,
    Its nothing but a thrill to read my rhymes cos I've mastered the street,
    Lyrics are on fire so when ya read em ya feel their heat,
    The complete lyric writer, never a biter, thats just not cool,
    I stayed in school and got educated so I would grow out of bein a fool,
    Every fucking drop is brand new so you cant fucking hate,
    Every thread you fucking make is eating right off my plate,
    And I appreciate every newbie still droppin their wisdom,
    Carry on creating and one day this couldbe your Kingdom,
    Writings become something of a religion and I pray I can keep it,
    Be easy, its B.E.Z, believe me one of the best, that aint no secret!

    BLAOW BLAOW BLAOW!!!!!!!

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    this will be closed no freestyles

  3. #3
    why man

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    i dunno u jus cant post freestyles they have a thread for this

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  6. #6
    ok man 10x man dont close this shit cuz i u can say just go crazy ok

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    ..in chains? Naw!
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    CLOSED. Thanks for the link Tricky.
    ArtificialIntelligence
    Sacred Scriptures Champ: 2006.....Brixton

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    nice peice for keystyle it's in the wrong section though gj.

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    Next time hit the closed button

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