WOW............................................... ...
pretty speechless after dis1, big nash i liked ur ideas, about basically a drunk civilian being in the bones of a "wife beater", but tim had the same refrence "a loved one failed", everything fit to the topic at the end, both of yall had vocab, but i felt tims was a bit extended, and the plot to tims story was like...amazing, like he scratched all details for me, i was speechless basically, especially the end having to to with "his omen" and the star which was his omen exploding, basically there was alot of foreshadowing in tims and he didnt quite give it all away like big nash did in his chorus which was like sum1 getting into a movie and a bytch in bacc of u says "he kills her at the end".....not bad tho nash, i seen u got into the sexual details a bit, lol, tim didnt really get into the "passion" but more or less the "devastation", ima tell u dis rite now, this has to be one of my most enjoyed topicals on RB so far, i look foward to seeing both yall next pieces
v/tim
