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    First Love

    see this chick I was checkin, since I was a youngin
    fifteen on the stage, and I was willin for lovin
    not about buggin, cuz I don’t wanna repel
    wanna get to know her fore’ she say farewell
    so I packed up my pimpin, n my mackin game
    im winnin this chick, or im goin insane
    fuck the shame, I’ll be holdin her tight
    we be watchin the stars, in the middle of the night
    she be kissin me right, jus the way I like it
    she liked my flow in text, so she told me to mic it
    and then I woke up…without her on the scene
    What The FUCK, guessin that was only a dream
    Next day I see this chick, and I kno I aint dreamin
    Knowin someday she be holdin my semen…(haha)
    She walks by me, and all I can do is smile
    Knowin if I don’t talk soon, ima be in denial
    So I stopped her in her tracks, told her my name
    Told her what i wanted, and she wanted the same
    i aint never forgot that chick, we was fly
    and whatever I wanted, she was down to ride
    Yadadamean?

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    alrite piece, nice topic
    flow - 7/10
    structure - 7/10
    rhymin - 8/10
    like it? - 8/10
    overall - 7.5/10

    the rhymin ws a bit simple, but it worked for the piece
    ws a gd topic to do, and you did it well
    keep it up
    Don't Do Drugs EP is coming soon.

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    you whent hard on that one
    don't diss me doe ya know
    you rap i rap let's keep it at that
    why diss me i don't know you
    see when i whent on this site last time
    as (TJB) i was banned because of what you was doing
    so don't get put out for some stupid shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    thx meng...yeah..simple rhymes..haha...i just had to spit it tho
    Yadadamean?

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    UPPIN THIS.......come on, gimme some feed ya'll haha




    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3638263
    Yadadamean?

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    Haha...alright I worked on this for a Collab..but it didnt get done...UPPIN






    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...82#post3642282
    Yadadamean?

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