10-20 lines
No biting
No d/r votes
if you over up you will be DQed.
No crew votes
Thug Passion
Lil Thug
10-20 lines
No biting
No d/r votes
if you over up you will be DQed.
No crew votes
ok this is my check in when is verse due? and i hope the best of luck for us both
lil thug who da fuck is you? probably a white mother fucker wearin niky jus to keep urself in check
these are monster lines dog im crushin you blind i got a couple techs a trunk full of nines
who ever b fuckin with me is fuckin with da streets got enough niggas to cut u up n bleed u dry by hangin u by ur feet
punk ass bitch you aint got shit to say your one of those doggs who spit one or two lines and walk away
my young boi said that gangstaness dont get the votes so now im assumin its the wackness
spitting in the dark you see? its tatal darkness so now i think its time i get it in cause this is the most focused that i've ever been
ppl say your coming up strong so i'll capture ur ass strap it to a chair and rape ur bitch who b in the blue thong
heh i jus felt like ending it i know the end is wack lol. so your turn juz go
Homie Queens is down the road.
You suckin 50's balls and still can remember your pass code.
Why you all lovin thug passion it's not the thug way.
And i hnow this is over you ain't thug thats what i have to say.
Lil thug is here and is pissed cuz you makin a fool out of the thug life.
Tupac is crying in his coffin right now cuz you cheated on his wife.
Why you havin your first battle against me?
Man bad move you a weak enemy.
I'm about to do a lil Randy Orton and end your fate.
This is just like chess you've gone right into check Mate.
You say you'r good, you say your great.
You ran right into a world of hate.
Well hope you are ready to die i am gonna make a release.
And like the undertaker says you will Rest........In.......Pease.
aight i respect that but this is not my first battle on here its my second ;P
lil thug who da fuck is you? probably a white mother fucker wearin niky jus to keep urself in check
O.K FUNNY
these are monster lines dog im crushin you blind i got a couple techs a trunk full of nines
NOPE GUNS ARE PLAYED UNLESS U USE IT RIGHT
who ever b fuckin with me is fuckin with da streets got enough niggas to cut u up n bleed u dry by hangin u by ur feet
NOPE A FILLER
punk ass bitch you aint got shit to say your one of those doggs who spit one or two lines and walk away
NOPE NICE 1ST AND 2ND LINE BUT NO PUNCH
my young boi said that gangstaness dont get the votes so now im assumin its the wackness
NOPE REALLY NEED 2 WORK ON PUNCHES
spitting in the dark you see? its tatal darkness so now i think its time i get it in cause this is the most focused that i've ever been
NOPE NO PERSONAL AT ALL
ppl say your coming up strong so i'll capture ur ass strap it to a chair and rape ur bitch who b in the blue thong
NOPE, U NEED 2 ELEVATE POOR VERSE, DONT WORRY U A NOWEIGHT U CAN ELEVATE
VS.
Homie Queens is down the road.
You suckin 50's balls and still can remember your pass code.
NOPE A FILLER
Why you all lovin thug passion it's not the thug way.
And i hnow this is over you ain't thug thats what i have to say.
NOPE A REALLY FILLER AND NO PERSONAL
Lil thug is here and is pissed cuz you makin a fool out of the thug life.
Tupac is crying in his coffin right now cuz you cheated on his wife.
CORNY AND PLAYED DOG, NO PUNCH
Why you havin your first battle against me?
Man bad move you a weak enemy.
NOPE A FILLER NO PUNCH
I'm about to do a lil Randy Orton and end your fate.
This is just like chess you've gone right into check Mate.
NICE O.K WORDED BUT RANDY DOESNT DO THE TWIST OF FATE
You say you'r good, you say your great.
You ran right into a world of hate.
NOPE A FILLER AGAIN
Well hope you are ready to die i am gonna make a release.
And like the undertaker says you will Rest........In.......Pease.
O.K, AND O.K VERSE NEED 2 ELEVATE ON PERSONALS AND PUNCHES
V//LIL FOR A BETTER VERSE THOUGH STILL A NOWEIGHT KILLER
HIT UP A BATTLE IN MY SIG THANKS
was my verse decent i would like your opinion please respond i would really appreciate it
wow.....ok if i culd vote,,but me an li lare in the same crew..
thug, wtf?! i couldnt even read it. your strucute and flow was all over the place and u had no personals and it looked prewriten
thug as in thug passion..lol not u lil thug.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............
could you vote on my other battle than? heres what the post is its in front lines ŠT®ëëT_þøëT vs. Thug Passion
someone please vote on ŠT®ëëT_þøëT vs. Thug Passion in the frontlines i really want to see the outcome of that
V/ Lil Thug. Passion hardly rhymed and Lil did so he gets my vote on that alone. On other criteria... no punches at all.. just all self glory..
Check my battle.. in sig.
lil... you had sum good punches...perosnals too.....stucutre was a bit off same with flow..complexity wasnt quite here..rhymes were good thoguh....relaly good ....vocabw as aiight...coiul;d be more upped but good verse home
passion... you also a good verse but rhymes were a lil weaker than lil's same with vocab..perosnals and punches werw a botu a tie.....nice job....nice verse but my vote goes to li...for a better overall verse..no hate
v/ lil thug
hey hit up my homiez battles honestly....lyric striker....thanks
Uppin.............................................
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