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Thread: Pulling through

  1. #1
    Mc-trinity
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    Pulling through

    Screaming “cease the fire”, friends’ deceased-ire leading to destructive divinity,
    Pillars falling in the vicinity, quake dust hazing the vision of trinity.
    Can’t even fucking see the enemy! Despairing as history disappearing in misery,
    “ride together” still eminent in the scenery, the shadow has me feeling eerie.
    Dreary, all this negativity yet still grabbing at the vigor, to all the dead soldiers…
    We pour you this liquor. Breathing, still holding the optimism, stop the schism.
    We got each other’s back even if we’re off-to-prison, as long as we living…

    -Chorus-
    Come and take walk with me...
    I need all of y'all to come and take a walk with me...
    I need for all of y'all to feel what I'm going through
    And see what I see, if you got time to take a walk with me
    Wait a minute now...
    Shit ain't like I thought it would be
    Come to Jersey from New York with me
    I know you busy...
    But take the time out to walk with me
    Pay attention on this tour with me
    Maybe I'm seeing something wrong
    Come and make sure with me
    Come and take a short walk with me

    Where’s my soul-at?
    Life seems so-black,
    I’m too bruised to know-that,
    Wounds starting to grow-back,
    This is the throwback
    Scars of old wounds are prominent,
    Memories of my shady past are dominant,
    I’m a bad person, it’s a fact, it’s eminent,
    Blood clots and gun shots, gloomy visions penetrate my dreams,
    Wake up in middle of the night, frightful screams
    My life’s just a pre-show but ma niggas dropping the curtain,
    so its time I was “Bound for Glory”, or a “hound for gory”, satisfaction,


    -Chorus-
    Come and take walk with me...
    I need all of y'all to come and take a walk with me...
    I need for all of y'all to feel what I'm going through
    And see what I see, if you got time to take a walk with me
    Wait a minute now...
    Shit ain't like I thought it would be
    Come to Jersey from New York with me
    I know you busy...
    But take the time out to walk with me
    Pay attention on this tour with me
    Maybe I'm seeing something wrong
    Come and make sure with me
    Come and take a short walk with me

  2. #2
    Mc-trinity
    Guest
    ma friend wrote da chorus

  3. #3
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    What does 'deceased-ire' mean?
    PE|WV

  4. #4
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

  5. #5
    Mc-trinity
    Guest
    where do i leave da links

  6. #6
    Mc-trinity
    Guest
    decease means die or expired

  7. #7
    Mc-trinity
    Guest
    any advice peeps?????

  8. #8
    Mc-trinity
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    any advice peeps plz

  9. #9
    Mc-trinity
    Guest
    any advice........................

  10. #10
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    rhymes were pretty good....same with vocab
    strucutre was not good at all man..u need to elevate on that
    complexity was aiight a lil too weak for a complex drop
    topic was pretty cool..it was aiight enough to be pretty good
    overall this was aiight..flow was aiight not that good
    but still..just elevate pn sum basic lyrifal skillz
    peace

  11. #11
    Mc-trinity
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    okai thxz

  12. #12
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    I believe Johnny posted a thread on how to leave links.

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