comin up

[MINI-me]

yo yall niggas aint ready yo yo yo check it

I call my self a butcher cuz on how i handle beef like how I tenderize the shit ill puch you right in your teeth you niggas r week dont come to my street niggas will have u runin ur shit like a hundred yard dash aint much to say but im about dat cash fuck around body parts left in a trash bag this is off the top of my hed niggas think there gangtsa wen they get hit wit the lead 50 was shot 9 times caught one close to his lip but im not like that cuz instead i distribute the shit thats it done now get at me dun

[Mic D]

wow.......come on now this cannot be real......ya have to be fucking around......and if this is a serious post........i have something for you

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=94096

^^^Go there.....there is alot of useful information there and also......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185583

^^^Go there....your breaking the rules of the forum

[ghostflow]

whaty the fucc is this doing in the first place

[bigsam]

both yall nigga sorry

[MagicConcept]

what the fucc is this doing in the first place

read the rules man stop wasting space

[mcbadboy]

yo rap is shit man u need to improve 2/10

[JayKay]

Shaggy: Like gee Scooby, did you just hear a loud crackling noise?
Scooby: Rhat? Ri Ridn't Rear Ranything.
Shaggy: Like oh my god Scooby, that's what the noise was!!! A rules been broken!!

[Mistral]

16 line minimum.

Fix up your structure, put it line on top of line, Paragraph form just kinda takes away from the piece I think.