i aint new at dis homie

[stacks5]

yo
it aint nuttin were im from homie
most niggaz i grew up wit cant hold me
i dont go to school i make that money sellin to phenes
i been on my own since i was 13
the way i move niggaz role model me
thats why at 14 i was an og
thats why niggaz like to hear my shit
we can pop it wit da burnas or we can bang wit da fists
got no hope been slingin dope
have u eatin out a feedin tube jus like da pope
i aint sweet n yall niggaz soon will c
ill give u more blows to the head than dat nigga ali
n if i new how to battle i would say holla at me

[Illogical]

u need 2 links to 2 pieces/rhymes that u had left DECENT feedback on. and u need a minimum of 16 lines. if u dont know wat im talkin bout read the stickies.

first off, i think u are sort of new at dis homie. structure was way off, and u always had 'the' spelled like 'da' and instead of nothing u put 'nuttin' and stuff like that. no offense people still do that but its getting repeated over and over around here so dont keep it going. try to think of something to rap about other than urself or how u sold dope on the streets

[kre8tiv]

lmao...