This How I Shut'em Down(sumthin quick)

[Lil Drew]

(verse 1)
you wanna how i shut these boys down yeah thats right i spit some bars by put them bitches down when i fight aight,
because i don't play no games so if they won't beef and spit sum flames then go head and set it up the game,
cause i'll shut'em down with my lyrical mind so they betta watch it when i drop a couple lines,
cause they be seeing stars when i my punches out into my bars,
and i don't need to touch them
cause a couple hook will fuck'em,
so be ready for the prequel puttin out a verse thats
will be lethal..

(chorus)x2
this how i shut'em downptu punches in verse and they get ass knocked out
and thats how shut'em

(verse 2)
shutin'em down is easy cause when i get beef with any bitch
i just write diss talkin all kinds of shit,
but if he talkin shit i choke his ass out until his heart stop thumpin in a couple of minutes,
thsi how do it in this game
so don't fuck wit me if u don't no my
name... jeah

(chorus)x2
this how i shut'em downptu punches in verse and they get ass knocked out
and thats how shut'em

[*Peaches*]

this could use some more serious work
yo structure was a lil fucked up and i didnt understand it well...
u need to try to make yo rhymes go together in the right places of the verse cus it was jus lik as if u were talkin but this was "ok" thats it needs alot of work on it my nig

[sILLable]

i replied to the full version of what ever this is..so take it from there....elevate..read tha rules..and TRY AGAIN

[*Peaches*]

and why do yu keep postin so may dam songs n shit? we get da picture, this is lik da 4th 1 dude calm down its ok... we hear u out but u can save all some of dat ok u keep postin song sfter song dam..