BLUNT WRAP VS Pursuit

[Chain]

check out my vote blunt.............................

[BLUNT WRAP]

Uppin 2 Vote Plz

[Night_Walker]

P.

Yo Listen young gun.......you ain't ready to pop off...........
You Being Hot ? Only when eating chicken wit Hot Sauce...
ok, decent opener
Nigga , I had ya moms last night , that marked savior....
Figure Im ya " Father " you can call me " Darth Vader "....
weak
Go back and Study ya ryhmes and shitty old raps......,
stole that , money and dimes, sold Pitiful Tracks........
just a rhyme no punch
Ya flow is way off , dude , like a broken water pipe......
Ya Verses are rusted.......................................
...........chances of you winning ? Only by Rolling Dice !
iight
Your skills couldn't get you rich even if you were playing monopoly
And in this battle you couldn't get votes not even from Democracy
i get it but could of worded better,
You need to take your ryhme book , feed it to the dumb rats
..............Cause Im getting tired of you and your stunt raps
Man I ripped and smoked this dude only thing left was a blunt wrap !
self-glory, nah

this was alil weak, your punches was not hard hitten at all, u needed some better wording if u had that ur verse would of been good. also ur flow was good the structure was koo but take all them periods of iight.


B.


Rippin Mc's Taking Dey Souls.... You Winning Gotta Betta Chance Seeing Micheal Wit A Real Nose... You Soft Trying Act Hard Now All Of Sudden... Jerseys Finest Why Am I Battling Da Bootleg Version Of Joe Budden... I'm Winning And He Mad... Nigga I'ma Give You So Much L's Dey Goin Put Ya Ass In A Rehab...(a Place Where Dey Put People Wit Drug Problems) Face It Nigga You Can't Spit... And Ya Punches Like A Bad Baseball Player Cause Dey Can't Hit... Can't Rap So Try Cursing Ya Lines... Nigga You Could Work At A Proffesional Hospital Wit Those Nursery Rhymes...(okay) Ya Closer's Okay But Wat A Bad Way To Start Of Shit... You Wouldn't Win Even If I Gave You 4 Votes To Start Of Wit...(okay) You Losin Only Thing You Beating Is Ya Cock...and Pursuit Dat Verse You Droped Make's Darkcide Look Like D-block...
From Da 3 Point Line Is Da Only Time You Shoot... Damn You Reach Gettin Ko Nowonder Ya Names Pursuit...(pursuit Means To Reach Something Or To Follow Something)

did want to break that verse down cuz u can't but i read it and it was a good verse. your punches was good, they were more connected and it hit hard. your flow was good, u had a good creativity work on hard personals, and fix ur structure up 2. its hard to break that down iight.

v/blunt

[BLUNT WRAP]

Uppin 3

[Pursuit]

uppin...... did you get my pm Blunt wrap ? about the structure

[Gifted Signs]

well yo this was pretty good battle Pursuit your verse was pretty creative but your punches really didn't hit hard until the closer you structure was nice and wordplay was good but you didn't come that hard for him like i seen in some of your battles before I know you can do better and Blunt you do need to work on your structure but the first dude that vote structure makes your punches weaker no your punches were not that hard but the hit the point nice wordplay and creative with your flow just work on your Structure and come alittle harder it was almost there nice spit from both of you

v/Blunt Wrap