Heaven ( the galaxy we dont see )

[FarsideEther]

I hold the nine planets...."hand it" to a propehcy of the lonley survivial man//
Stranded in the thought of ether...inflict the Regions beyond space...to the depths of faith//
Souls bare witness to the shit we'll never know..implications of nova guided scripts of nirvana written to the foreshaken land of galaxy tainted plan//
Prodigy of gods..mind.. a unknown life line...the story of the beginning of man kind//
Stars.To sum it up quick, the shit in space of heart...tribulations of dark...the part of space,,,were we know, the endless glow wont go//
Walls of pictures a untold story of a caveman's hints...with lifes complexity all begins all ends...some how the middle must fit in to this shit//
The intellegents of man ... pathetic ... figure out ether ... then talk the book smart "preacher"//
N.A.S.A? in other words "Never Again Should we Attempt" to figure out sight of space and light to night its a change of time Right?... The Ether is the beginning of God's wish for "Life"

[FarsideEther]

ill take some feed back if people are willing to give me some. Dont take it easy, truth only is it good or bad bottom line!

[warchild]

wassup son this piece was strange but dope i was understanding some of the shit you was saying but not all of it.
the structure was ok the flow was ok all around it was an average piece, but keep posting this was a strange topic but thats good.

[warchild]

reply to my new post please.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163673

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[FarsideEther]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

Wtf dawg... i have no mic. Please re state in more simple text