Last edited by Sergio...; May 31st, 2004 at 02:10 AM
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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yeh..
oops..forgot bout this..let me drop some gay shit for this shiznackle..
kid couldnt take a beaten, he's just a very low tolerance man
the way i got this bitch M and M melting at the palm of my hand
stop with the rap kid, u aint never had ya shit straight
only play u ever got was off DJ Gay Slay's latest mixtape
there's ya fate chump, reality i'm sure u can't cope
cuz i'm sure that pit died, before they can feed it some dope
dude's a hoax, aint on point but on the move browsing & posting
cuz we all see that Mad Mike is only half man, half e motion
this battle im coastin, cruise control ..u winning will never happen
cuz i'm like strong sedatives the way i put an end to the madness.
woot.done in 2 minutes..Lol.
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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...Thought u'd b nice at text..But ya whole verse is dismantled
Can't you hear the voters screaming Go back to audio battles...
..This fag hopes he could come dope..but it aint in his roots
Plus his styles more worn out than a old pair of K-mart boots...
..Dude,I'm the teacher n' u bout to step in my the class room
Sav-ir(save yer) shit like u I told u wait 5 mins. to go 2 the bathroom...
...I already passed you, Im way past you..you don't shine kid
Plus I'm pissed..Cuz I couldve went to front lines to see this^^...
..Bitch,yer Audios are a joke, ya Lp will sell 3 copies at most
No one will listen to this bitch...Like the boy who cried wolf...
Sorry bout the late drop
Totally forgot bout this as well...least I showed,
and both of us were late as Rascal said
Last edited by Mad Mike; May 29th, 2004 at 03:05 PM
ok they were both over the deadline but atleast Savir. posted a verse so he gets my vote..
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Up..
ok both were late and both seemed to have rushed their verses
we have to take a little more time with these verses guys
cus just in case you dont know, its not wether you win or lose
its how consistently you come dope...
with that said
this battle still wasnt that bad, believe me i have seen worse
and both have potential, if they take the time to write their verse
Savir, not a bad drop, but i have seen you do better,
better wording would have helped your verse alot in most cases
stop with the rap kid, u aint never had ya shit straight
only play u ever got was off DJ Gay Slay's latest mixtape
^didnt really like this concept much and could have been worded
weakest punch in the battle, and i know you are better than this
on the other hand
dude's a hoax, aint on point but on the move browsing & posting
cuz we all see that Mad Mike is only half man, half e motion
took me a second to get this punch, but it was quite witty when u think about
it..good job here, best lines in your verse...
MM
wasnt feelin the K-mart line too much, not a good diss to me
comparin someone's style to ugly boots, just doesnt grab my attention
but you made up for it here...
.I already passed you, Im way past you..you don't shine kid
Plus I'm pissed..Cuz I couldve went to front lines to see this^^...
wording was off, and the punch was average, but it was the best in
your verse..
none the less savir wins with a more consistent verse..
the line i quoted helped you get the win..
v/savir
Savir: Came pretty consistent with punches... decent concepts cept for the gay slay line I didn't really like... Half man/half emotion line was dope... felt some of the multis
Mad Mike: Don't need to bold... and the K-mart line was just wack... verse gradully got better towards the end but wasn't really hard hitting... verse just wasn't strong enough...
Vote - Savir
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
hmm..ok...the gay slay was a personal..he was actually on dj gay
slay's mixtape..no lie.
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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vote savir.....
mike didnt really diss him. he pretty much praised him for doing audio. shit just didnt hit hard.....sav-ir wordplay was a huge stretch....ir doesnt = your.
savir had some nice hits in there...i liked the closer...madness wordplay....shit was cool
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
Eh.
vote-Savir
Better verse.
AI. Legendary.
19x HOF. Seven Titles. 50.
savir wins
that other guy
doesnt
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