Gimmick Matchup: Brethren (8-2) vs SyaNidal (2-0)

[Thrust]

dude...brethren wrecked this...syanidal really didn't hit..he had some soft wordplay for real..they aren't what's effective...brethren came personal and harder with his punches..hence the punches...and his wordplay was just more humorous

vote-brethren

[Brethren]

Whatever Syn... you can keep your verse... I don't really care

[KayOhh]

Jeez Shock, dont start be'n bitches.

Syn's verse is finalized way before the deadline, so big fuck'n deal, its all good.

Breth, you gotsta admit you kinda confused him a bit.

Ima vote for Breth here tho, just edged it in my opinion.

[Laureate]

On that very day... he had Lyric screaming "GODZILLA"

Blah

[Brethren]

^^^ You didn't like???

[Brandon Heat]

Brethren's first line was dope... the rest was syns...


Syn should win... get your own style though buddy... *shakes head at the blantant text style stealage*

[Nique.]

vote-Syn..

I dont know about the deadline situation, but he had better fat jokes..Brethen came nice too but I think Syn edged him.

[Aisle Phive]

SyN, you CANNOT edit your verse after he drops. Brethren, did he edit his verse after you posted yours? As in his verse? It says he edited his verse around a half hour after you dropped. If he edited his verse for anything more than spelling errors I'm going to DQ him. Let me know ..

[Steven William]

go look in shock chat... AIsle
he siad im droppin tomorrow so I made better punches
and I aske dhim to go 20 n never realized he was only doin 14
until I check back n seen his verse he asked me to put it back at 14
so thats why theres an Edit AFTER his verse was up I didnt
edit any of my punches after his verse was up just removed some
to make the lin limits equal...if thats cheating by goin the agreed
lines then DQ me last time I checked your suppose to agree
I didnt mind taking out my whacker lines n leavin my good ones..

Hence the edit after he dropped

I dropped a 20 minute key of weak shit and breth said

I'm not dropping in LLL till tomorrow

so I edited them cause he had more time than me A lot more
and then he ended up dropping yesterday anyway but I still
had all those punches in there before he dropped

[KayOhh]

^ No DQ's.

If you lose breth, you take the loss.

[Steven William]

up.

[>Inertia>]

Yea...this was a pretty funny battle to read.

Sya: You came strong with almost all of your lines, and this is probably the best I've seen from you. Most of the punches were funny, and although a couple were borderline nonsensical, they pretty much all hit.

Your best line:

This guy is so fat by da time his spit hits it ice...hes just fireless,
If I pushed him down a mountain...
...he'd roll over more then Cingular Wireless,

Breth: You also came nice in this battle. Most of your lines were pretty funny, and they were more complex and witty than those Sya spit. However, in gimmick battles like these, I feel that comedy is more important, and in that sense, Sya topped you. A few of your lines were nothing special, but most were decent. Your best line was...

Killed ya momma at birth... but never thought it's wrong
It's sad... Syn learned the alphabet the day he bought a bra

/v Sya, but this was extremely close.

[Blood Drenched Tampon]

Vote Syanidal



his verse was just better all in all. I actually laughed good job.

[Blitzkrieger]

damn...funniest battle i seen in a while

syn's wasnt as good before he edited it. Breth woulda won had he kept that. But I vote syn for what he has now. Breth came good but syn had more funnyness throughout all his lines.

v/syn

[SmokaJoka]

SyaNidal wins, closed.

SyaNidal (3-0)
Brethren (8-3)