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Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Make a verse made of entirely fat jokes.
Yup...10 it is
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Told this fat fuck to make a right...by da time he did he was left,
shock played some bball fuck around da world...
...we just shot Around Breth,
This guy is so fat by da time his spit hits it ice...hes just fireless,
If I pushed him down a mountain...
...he'd roll over more then Cingular Wireless,
Ya on Atkins Diet deprive yaself of carbs...wont make ya any thinner,
I mean the last time I saw you use...
...the VCR you inserted a TV Dinner,
ya Loss percentage is fatting...just like the name you made for yourself,
the Keebler guys invited you to the treehouse...
you end up eatin' the cookies n the Elf!,
your not proud of yourself...we know cause of all those liposuction scars,
I mean even your sig says your fat...
...notice how your name wider than ours,
your the very reason for earth quakes...don't tell us what we alredy knew,
you wear size 5,248 foot boots...
...just take one off so I can walk a mile in your shoe,
any way to end this debate...I dont like hatin' on shock Value,
but dawg come on your so big boned...
...at birth ya mom came outta you!
Last edited by Steven William; May 11th, 2004 at 09:14 PM
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
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Last edited by Steven William; May 13th, 2004 at 08:42 PM
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
For those of you new to the league... Lyric is asian
Killed ya momma at birth... but never thought it's wrong
It's sad... Syn learned the alphabet the day he bought a bra
Heffer's owned... few fat people around, guess not many shown
Synidal is so fat... he got booed on Jenny Jones
I'mma be discreet with the kill... take Syn and feed him beef
How you gonna stomp me though... you can't see ya feet
Hear them clear bells? Come and get some beer pal
This kid's so fat... he just made a parody of Weird Al
Wore green the other day... got hungry and dropped filler
On that very day... he had Lyric screaming "GODZILLA"
Truly a tub of lard... although I think you can beat me
But...
How's he sposed to throw a punch... when this guy can't reach me
Go drop extra... hit me with google jokes rhymed at ya best
Then I'mma drop twenty... cause we count the lines in ya neck
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
good ass battle...
breth... had some decent lines... punches hit ok... nothin special tho...
best lines:
Killed ya momma at birth... but never thought it's wrong
It's sad... Syn learned the alphabet the day he bought a bra
& the closer....
decent verse... personals lacked a tiny bit... metas were ok...
structure and flow were fined overall...decent..
sya.... good verse... punches connected...ya verse had me laughin....
you had some nice personals too like the sig line.... and ya opener was fire....
overall i think u had the better verse here.
vote -syanidal
the fuck is up with all the fat jokes in those verses? lol.
nah man... you can't just add in 6 lines...
you only got 14, change it back to what it was
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Lol, this was probably one of the best (if not the best) gimmick matches I've seen in LLL Jr. Very nice fam.
But...
Ima go with Syn in this one. He just came with the funnier shit, wittier too.
Tight...Originally Posted by SyaNidal
Anyway, V/Syn.
Syn man.... very well done. The cingular line had me rollin (no pun intended)
Breth I really thought you came kinda half assed compared to your usual shit... you lost some of your edge when you mentioned Lyric and the whole Godzilla shit..... shoulda focused on Syn himself.
Vote - SyaNidal
Well... considering the fact that he dropped a wack verse... and edited it right after I dropped...
I don't know
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Breth man I asked 20? in Shock thread you said stay at 14...
I only have 14 lines bro... I took my whackest out
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
You changed every line... what are you talking about
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Not to freepost but I changed 8 of them before you dropped
then I edited again cause i thought we were going 20...
sorry-I though you'd accept the 20 lines so I droppe more
and then I edited out after i saw your post I edited what I
didnt like so much...
Edit-To pervent cloggin thread all my commenst(unless I up)
will go here...
Macabre-yeah I know...I edited like 6 times spelling errors and
such at first then I realized Breth said he aint droppin today
and seein as I keyed my verse I didnt find it fair soo....
Also it looks like this could be the big battle for this week!
Last edited by Steven William; May 11th, 2004 at 10:06 PM
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
Yea, I read Syanidal's verse before and it wasn't nearly as good. However, I dunno when he edited it so....but he definately changed his verse.
No beef Sya, just saying...
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