"Mrs. Walker". OBLIGATORY BRAGGING WRITES PIECE.

[Baron Mynd]

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She teaches ..

.. Geography, we were s'posed to study the world today ..
.. but honestly, i cant hear a single word she says.
& while she's standing there, drawin up plans and maps
Im nodding my head .. to Black Star in the back of the class.
with headphones on .. ignoring her 'valueble thoughts'
guess its Me Against The World; like that album of Pacs
We had some quick test, on which lakes fish swim best ..
.. i opened the cover, got stuck tryna answer the Index.
like any kid wants to read bout saving The Black Forest

Ziiiiiiiiing!

Ahhh,
saved by the bell like Zack Morris.


haha, fuck it. just felt like typing.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=127056&page=2

[~Guru~]

man i thought this was an excellent drop

you stayed on topic
you had good metas
good flow

i enjoyed reading it

it was a great drop wish there was more 9/10

[Lingwistik]

ehhh i feel differently, i didnt think it was great


i mean it was basic, i guess it had an ok topic, but you gotta expand on it more. you need more detail too, it sems like evveryhting in the verse was to general i guess, the flow was ok, the only really meta i saw was the lat bar, yayhn you did stay on topic, but it was short so you could easily stay on topic, just keep aowrkin on it and you will get better

peace

[Lingwistik]

damnit, didnt realize i postd twice,can you please delete this

[Baron Mynd]

rofl @ thinking this is a serious piece - you've a lot to learn young buck.

[Edicius]

man i thought this was an excellent drop

you stayed on topic
you had good metas
good flow

i enjoyed reading it

it was a great drop wish there was more 9/10


lmao`

[Lingwistik]

man, i know this was not serious, cuz i read your othr things, i was being sarcastic, im so fuckin bored

[Richard Parker]

this was avergae for an OM..
but trash for you...
obviously you were messing around though..

[Baron Mynd]

feeble looking to catch another open mic diss the way he be actin ..

[Edicius]

lol @ average for an om..

[Judge Judy]

The funny thing is that Cam's attempt at a lame piece still
whores most pieces in OM at the minute. Tuh tuh!!!
Loved the Zack Morris bit..

Whats wierd is that I got the saved by the bell
theme tune played at a club I went to the other night.

[PNB]

I thought this was cool for a short key, I was reading it and honestly it had a real Mr.Lif style flow to it. The entire time the style had Mr. Lif written all over it, i was like "damn" this is kinda funky.
And since i like Lif, i liked this...

Fav Section....

with headphones on .. ignoring her 'valueble thoughts'
guess its Me Against The World; like that album of Pacs
We had some quick test, on which lakes fish swim best ..
.. i opened the cover, got stuck tryna answer the Index.

cool drop

[Baron Mynd]

Thanks. :^)

[PNB]

would you be able to return the favour on my piece....uhh it's titled

Address To The Nation
one sec i'll grab a link..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=127156

wooooooord haha

[Stephen Mayfield]

Nice drop Sludge god .. good shit .. keep it up Pz ..