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    death....

    death... a sonnet

    That children in their loveliness should die
    Before the dawning beauty, which we know
    Cannot remain, has yet begun to go;
    That when a certain period has passed by,
    People of genius and of faculty,
    Leaving behind them some result to show,
    Having performed some function, should forego
    The task which younger hands can better ply,
    Appears entirely natural. But that one
    Whose perfectness did not at all consist
    In things towards forming which time can have done
    Anything,—whose sole office was to exist,
    Should suddenly dissolve and cease to be
    Is the extreme of all perplexity.

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    ::.. overall i thought it could have been better..
    ...good flow..
    ...descent rhymes...
    ...good feelin...
    ...could feel emotions....
    ....nice structure.....
    .....good rhytme.....
    overall good....rate:7/10

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