Verses Due: Sunday, February 29th 2004
Voting Ends: Thursday, March 4th 2004
Topic: Lost In Space
Verses Due: Sunday, February 29th 2004
Voting Ends: Thursday, March 4th 2004
Topic: Lost In Space
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Last edited by TheUnderRated; March 1st, 2004 at 12:46 PM
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
I open my eyes, concious yet paralyzed..
My afflicted cerebral replays seconds before my demise...
I call out to anyone, only my echo replies..
So alone yet a feel a warmth always by my side...
Try to take a stride, scenery flips to my adolescence...
Is my life flashing before my eyes in calm reminesence?..
I see my X girl chillin an expansion in her stomach..
think back on the child i never knew and my heart begins to plummet..
A tear in her eyes as she grips my note in her hand..
read it aloud baby ...as it says " I AIN'T YOUR MAN!..
I did her so wrong but whats the lesson to learn..
Inner struggles locked away now stressin its hard to discern...
Then it went jet black afraid I started to breakdown...
yet still strangely warmed now i'm back in my hometown...
Retarded kid we called em bean just hangin on the block...
this is the day he got jumped.. and i did nothing to stop...
Beatin till braindead sportin red they killed em for treason..
yet identities were mistaken so ........for no fuckin reason!...
I felt the pain and fear as he was mobbed to the ground...
No clue of what is happening as 5 men begin to pound...
Inaudible cries that moment i gain X-ray eyes...
dislodged his spine from his cortex and his heart flatlined...
picture gone but momma crys present as she picks him off the pavement...
no one knew his real name so why i do i know now it was David?....
Could i Save the Kid? I'd probably be left in the same condition..
now voices flood my head...i close my eyes try not to listen..
every side of every opinion as i scream Why show me now?...
what predicament am i in where my feelings helplessly rush out?...
I felt sorrow deep inside as i clasped my hands to my face...
Each step another scene I feel lost in this place....
I stumble on will i ever find anything i know not..
Faint voices carry me on cause there all that i got...
the voices clearer now I can see my girl and my mother..
My father my uncle my aunt and my brother....
they're all smiling trying to hide the sadness i was such a funny kid..
they sit and laugh dismally and joke of the strange things i did...
My eyes open slowly as things come into view....
I try to call out to my loved ones but have trouble with that sense too...
The doctor see me, screams its a Miracle! He had benign papilloma...
my mother puts her head close to mine and tells me....
joey...............you were in a coma.............
Last edited by TheUnderRated; February 28th, 2004 at 09:32 PM
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
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