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@Phalanx @Ryno
Maaaaaan….
Pay this trash mod w/ dad bod no attention, he’s pity worthy
The way that gimmick is gettin slept on, it reminds me of his shitty tourney
Wasnt til Banana clips loaded his frame, Diddy realise his opponents enraged
Came in toatin the gauge
N went ape shit & rode on Ryno...
Donkey Kong Countrys opening stage
I thought Phal had perhaps the more creative take this week on his angle, but Ryno def had the better wording. Phal’s looks like it’s maybe 3 or even 4 lines long to me here with the way it’s formatted lol
vote - Phal by a little, can easily see it going the other way in a split
Phals bar felt way stretched and the hit was forced, boarder line corny to me. Rynos wasn’t super creative or a hard hit but it flowed well and was a good personal. His setup gave his punch a little extra push.
V/Ryno
I thought phal posted random rap lyrics at first, but besides that I just wasn’t feeling this one. I appreciate the new take on the format and there’s absolutely nothing wrong with that, but the punch itself just didn’t hit for me.
Ryno - this was kind of light but it struck harder on him because of the personal tie in with the gimmick thing. Not bad for what it is and it’s def enough to grab the win this week.
Vote Ryno
Ry had the personal angle but the concept is liiight/barely there
Very simplistic
It needed more, or a better conceot altogether
Phal's structure was a bit wonky but his concept was better
Even tho it reached a little
Vgt phalanx
i see phalanx tried something different this week but it didnt hit for me .. i mean i did get it and its a good concept but at the end the execution just didnt do it for me
ryno was good, direct, and I think its a good personal. could have been worded a bit differently but at the end this battle is just a matter of preference and style taste
got ryno
Vote Phal
V/phalanx
It was interesting to see phalanx change up his formula a bit and it turned out to be refreshing. I enjoyed the creativity in the punch well done.’Ryno was nice here I just enjoyed Phals punch more
I am too noob and don't know what real punches are...so farrr, but learning
Ryno went real simple here...simple concepts I mean,
The rhyme is good hes got the extra rhyme on opener
But hes doing shit like trying to promote his gimmik tourney win/orget more voting on oldshit? WHILLLE dissing an old tourney that phal must've hosted that sucked or died....eh
So I like his writing just not how easy&self-centered he made punch...
Phal here defff cheated like me last week (unintentionaly I'm sure)...this just draaaags on...it's a GOOD "play on DK"...it is, Except, the DK play itself, like the whole thing - is sooo stretched and could have been done more succinctly...As soon as he says Diddy... anyone in their 20s.30s knows his finale closer is a bit2 eazy/obv/drags on... not saying I am not a victim of such things as we see from last week...just calling it how i see it...
So there's my nitpicks/aaaand positives from the Contender's arena this wk:
I truly belive based on Ryno's history, and based on the fact that Phal appears also to be a polished older vet,
Both would need to come harder in the coming weeks if they ever hope to playoff run / champ dis shit...
moving on,
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REALLY WANNA CALL TIE AND WUSS OUT BUT
we will process the information more.
***edit Run program***
V/Ryno 7.5/10 FOR smoother/ shorter/sweeter/more efficient bar that hit a tiny bit harder
Phalanx 7/10 FOR good concept bar just felt he made errors dragging it out for rhymeANDcontent sakeee which hurt the crispness by a halfpoint loss...
Thanks guys for dropping GL going forward
Man this was a dope match, Phal dope punch set up and all
I just felt like it did take awhile for the haymaker to land, and
And it was good but just wordy I guess?
Ryno was comedic I enjoyed the punch as well both had decent multi
Helping they flow Phal had better multis but Ryno had better wording
Very close here but imma lean towards Ryno by a cunt hair.
Ryno wins