candy vs Beautiful Vixen (Candy wins.)

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@Beautiful Vixen

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self sacrifice, put your head a vice - x marks the charter
leave her ring untouched call it dunk of the year - vince carter
you dirty birdie getten wordie with a pro tickle her pink
ima cave girl draggen queen to put her sick L in the bin
flushed hush im dust of my pen with a bastard of a flow
upper cut her nose bone through gristle, dump the pistol all show
one punch down
one punch up
drunk off of power, vodka and her hype
then drown whats left of my serotonin in stereotype
no disguise this bitch flappen her gums like we bout to get some
yeh you can lick my asshole after iggy azalea dies cunt

I'll drop by tonight

Watch out! Beautiful Vixen taking over the game
Beautiful Vixen take Candy out of fame
You dropped 10 lines still can't spit raw lines
You can't handle my flaw lines
Lost your thoughts because weak brain
Disrespect me, you better stay in your lane
I'll break your bone and leave you in pain
You ain't on Savage level
You on low average level
You are too ugly to roll with hoes
You are broke to making does

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Look like click by mistake
I hope staffs can fix it
and Candy don't forget two links

Solid battle.. I’ll bb to vote

Crazy to see the talent on here hasn’t dropped off one bit

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Thanks for battling me @ Candy

Candy wins for threatening to tickle her opponent’s pink, and scheduling a salad tossing session pending the passing of Igloo Australia. My bird twitched slightly at the thought of lesbian textcee sexual subjugation, and that was enough to sway me in Candy’s direction. Once upon a time, when this was a good country, imagery was a category in text battles. Candy’s imagery was better. Erica Baddie had a disappointing lack of lesbian prison sex imagery, which was unfortunate after Candy set the tone by going first. Candy was also moar complex and had better attempts at punchlines. So there it is.

Vote candy
Felt more like a battle verse to me
Other person was more like a audio battle in 94

self sacrifice, put your head a vice - x marks the charter
leave her ring untouched call it dunk of the year - vince carter
okay
you dirty birdie getten wordie with a pro tickle her pink
ima cave girl draggen queen to put her sick L in the bin
It didnt rhyme, however tickling of the pink is line of the battle, and the reference to Denaris is noted.
flushed hush im dust of my pen with a bastard of a flow
upper cut her nose bone through gristle, dump the pistol all show
i am a fan of violence however i am not a fan of slow pistol dumping.
one punch down
one punch up
drunk off of power, vodka and her hype
then drown whats left of my serotonin in stereotype
i thought this was very light
no disguise this bitch flappen her gums like we bout to get some
yeh you can lick my asshole after iggy azalea dies cunt
ass licking +1

vs

Watch out! Beautiful Vixen taking over the game
Beautiful Vixen take Candy out of fame
very direct. in an uncomfortable way
You dropped 10 lines still can't spit raw lines
You can't handle my flaw lines
are you both battling Vixen? lines does in fact rhyme with lines
Lost your thoughts because weak brain
Disrespect me, you better stay in your lane
I'll break your bone and leave you in pain
Directly said once again! but i needed a bit more visual. which bone? how was it broken?
You ain't on Savage level
You on low average level
this was okay here.level does rhyme with level also. good multi with that
You are too ugly to roll with hoes
You are broke to making does
i wasnt feeling this one :-/


i think Vixen attacked more directly, but with that being said it was without any addons or percs. I need a metaphor or something to spice it up. Candy got a bit metaphysical with the rhyming at one point but overall i thought it had some fresher approaches and punch a format i am accustomed to seeing in a battle.

v/Candy

I’m not gonna go bar for bar breakdown as there were no quoteables in this battle. Candy had the more direct battle verse with a couple of light jabs and a lot of filler.
Vixen you should read some other text battles and pick up the format a bit more; set up first line that leads into a punchline in the second with something clever creative or wordplay flipped so it’s not just a basic insult if that makes sense.
V/candy

I’m not gonna go bar for bar breakdown as there were no quoteables in this battle. Candy had the more direct battle verse with a couple of light jabs and a lot of filler.
Vixen you should read some other text battles and pick up the format a bit more; set up first line that leads into a punchline in the second with something clever creative or wordplay flipped so it’s not just a basic insult if that makes sense.
V/candy

This was a pretty basic battle- there were some light jabs that rhymed but nothing that really stood out on its own. I got Candy taking this because she had slightly more complexity and felt like she was in attack mode whereas vixen was basically just cyphering. No hate on this vote, keep elevating.
v/Candy