WK 6: Axe Vs Bag Mandela - Bag Wins

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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

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@Axe. @Bag Mandela

We coulda set this up in advance, I'm talkin' front lines too...tactically I'm wicked
Window of opportunity? I'd cause a backdraft & make us all wonder if Mandela actually existed

I hold a grudge, call it melodramatic, I want this feminine faggit dead in a casket,
My therapist says I should "forget n move past it" so I'll put axe in the ground just to bury the hatchet

Mandela got it in my book with better wordplay.. and a more effective punch...

Bag
Had a great multi scheme goin. Axe in the ground/bury the hatchet, a little played Ive used it before on a diff site, still a good np tho.
Couldnt makr any correlations out of Axes punch this week

Axe was actually sitting on flames here all of the words he used do have a good association without much of a reach. but to cause a backdraft you need flames/fire. i think if you had worked that into the punch with the Mandela effect you would have been looking a top punch this week. As a matter of fact, that is the ONLY thing that i was iffy about concerning this punch. Bag i liked his punch the transition from set up to punch was smooth. I dont think your concept was new either BUT the wording was good and the rhyme scheme felt natural.im picking a winner because i have to but this week this was one of my favorite matchups posted. good job

v/ Bag

Two dope bars. Solid concepts, and good execution. Im edging it to Bag here, but only because I seen a similar Mandela Effect concept used last season. (By Cody Nash if memory serves.) That said, kudos to both. Battle of the Week, for me.

I had trouble understand axes bar at first but I think that was more down to me as the reader than anything he did, his execution was clean. Bags punch was a nice flip, kinda like something rhyme asylum wouldve spit. Gonna have to go with bag here although me not understanding axes bar first time round took a lot of the sting out of it
V/bag

VOTE: Bag Mandela

Axe you have to be careful with the dots and questions mark's because when both of y'all have decent punches it comes down after that to readability and that stuff makes a punch kinda choppy so Axe gets this with a little bit better wording and the Hatchet thing being a strong visual from the Nameplay.

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My bad I meant Bag Mandela gets this with a little better wording and strong visual.