Intro for "What You Need"
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Quote:
I've got an idea, let's cruise in hell
We barely fucking starting, but you lose yourself
In these sheets?..............lay your hearse
Conveyer belts of pain and hurt as you say my verse
Question:............. Should I pay her first?
Cause this is where I take her shirt and take her turf
Take her pants -- ease that bitch off
I love how that vanilla cloth stitch is soft
Deep inside is your treasure cove
I'll exit with the riches gone
You wanna S-Bend down pleasure's road?
Well, let's settle into liquor's loft
We'll sift and trot through fields of past that goes into now
Before I get through and cast you off into exile
Don't exhale,
Let me feel your air move as your nose inhales fumes
We're Weightless.
Look inside of my message that entails tombs
I'm trailing you, waiting to...
Get you in the greatest mood
Any more questions?...let's save it boo
Professor's your addiction;, my answers you're craving too
I'll release my libido's Kraken, it'll awake the pool
I mean...fucking the Frost, you'll just be enslaved in blue
I'll be the one you'll think about forever,
The dick you gave it to
Don't get mad, get fucking angry...for me
Take all that stress and hatred out... on me
You'll cry about a thousand times
I'll resign in the back with a thousand dimes
Shame sets in for me like a Spring time breeze
Can't focus on the psychedelics, let alone the leaves
You've grown homed to needs, you think I hold the keys
To unlock your box's pleas, now you're down on your knees
Looking up at me, moaning for your needs
Shifting on your knees, giving more to me
This CD sounds looped like infinite Fast Forward & Rewind
From Time, my fingers clash toward, clicking on your design
Now we clime my rich climate, just keep climbing
Your timing, is still a little off, while we're riding
Bite that fucking pillow, and use it to drying,
Off those tears, got no use for pouring that
Once you start those years, ain't no fucking going back
Lose confusion while we're fusing, think of how long you haven't been abused just...like this
I feel the fear pacing in your chest, it's so rhythmic
Lend me a torch to light up a chorus to cross your bridges
Begin in burst when the sin hurts you can sing in free verse
But ain't no time to fuck slow...climb atop me
Move in mach-speed; watch me; while I work, no rehearse
I'm so fucking cocky...
Grit yo fucking teeth, and leave scratches that will scar for weeks
You'll member this toxic love cause that's when you crawled and tweaked
You use to be apart the small and weak, till you saw a leak
Like every casino, you tried to stall this cheat
Volcanic frustration pent up and flowing until you stopped to rock me
In the chlorophyll,
Beneath the surface is where you lay because you popped a molly
An aquatic predator, and I think it's sexy how you stroke
Scrolls brushing shoulders with the waft, the best things you ever wrote
Know this when it overloads like waves crashed into a coast
The sex was interstellar like NASA;
Casper foreplay how you slashed into a ghost
The last is for the boast, when you pass when you roast
You'll need to get High For This,
Before you lose grip and smash into the ropes
That nicotine brought you back from the edge
When you gasp and start to choke
Get the fuck back in bed
I've more hours to last until I'm broke
You're trapped but you can hope
While I laugh, we lope
.................................................. .....
Dope & X settles into your system,
Let the rage join in, take a glass, and let the rest work
You're not the only victim
I'll be indulging on you as my last dessert
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Re: Intro for "What You Need"
@Professor Frost
that was a GREAT drop.... I'm speechless.
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Originally Posted by
CLA919
I need to put these quick writes in my microsoft word or google document. I fucked up on a few lines.
Thanks for reading, I'm just prepping my mind for how lyrically in-depth I'm going to try and take it with this girl and this story.
When I say lyrically, just have some real meaning behind it. Not the plastic rhymes or the back pack cash raps. Just some real story telling through the lyrics that you can read like a novel.
Re: Intro for "What You Need"
When I flow, I just flow, and will post the fuck ups and all ONLY because fuck ups have been released like crazy - Not saying it was a good thing - but it was definitely instrumental in getting me to understand why and how I do what I do. I seriously think though on flows as these before truly published, should have 2-3 people on it to proof it JUST to make sure serious beef isn't started - CAUSE - just like pyschics and shit, everyone has an OPINION and no hell bound ghost writer's verse should be taken as bible - though sometimes in effect, they're not necessary lying either. Just some fun type shit that should be considered an art vs the really real if that makes sense.
@Professor Frost
CLASSIC FUCKP UOENO, that entire verse practically, BUT it was the hottest song everrrr.... I woulda been pissed if I was that new guy cause that song if not pulled back so quickly would have BOOMED him. What FUCKED up his reebok deal WAS the verse about slipping her the mickey, just listen: (I was dying when I caught it cause they released on XM prior to pulling back) vAEv
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qEkcYsqu6MU&feature=kp
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Don't get mad, get fucking angry...for me
Take all that stress and hatred out... on me
if you didnt catch readers atten from that nothing will do it... excellent read i love the fluip in moods and personal;ity wow this is most impressive
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lmao cai going at frost
this was nice frost, flowed well and read really smoothe had good transitions and was written well
content was clean and had a "cool" feeling to it man
nice job
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@Professor Frost
- get those links man.
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The first thing that stands out about this is your imagery, you tell a good story and keep the readers mind seeing visuals, impressively might i add. your first two lines after the quoted bit didn't flow that great for me but you brought it back after this "You'll cry a about a thousand times" <--- you know better than that nigga. anyhow, after that fiasco, your flow picked back up, I really liked the methaphor in the Psychedelic line, that shit was ill to me. "To unlock your box's pleads" <-- once again you know better homie lol. to sum this up storytelling is way on point, the flow got choppy at times, but the rhymes weren't always basic or forced. I liked it a lot, mainly for the sleight of hand used in telling a great little tale of addiction good job homie.
I know this is in reply to you feeding two of my pieces in a row but whenever you're bored af or have the time
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