WK 3: Bahriman Vs Pharahs Army - Bah wins

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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)



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@Bahriman @Pharaohs Army

Check. In for Rebuttals

Check. Down for rebuttals also. GL

dependin on the pronunciation: i could bury 'im, borrow 'em, poison 'um w/ boron, send him to Brahma w/ tha llama
too many commas only cuz no1 is fluent inthe contest - me?I'd prefer 2nd&3rd if i'm brutally honest...[but don't matter cuz]this dude's got no promise

All those words crammed together Vs the GOAT. Just stop homez
All that squeezing & no punch won’t get you a win like Jon Jones

Gotta group of killas ready for war. I’ll I gotta do is call, B
Arm outa hide before we on sight you & shoot missiles through your body

i’m sick ‘n u suck. put dick to ur slut.,tho-that UFCplay might get u the dub!!~

Props on doing the rebuttals and getting them quicker, shits rare. I got Bahriman taking this one, i thought that Jon Jones line alone wouldve taken this battle, good stuff nicely delivered. Pharaoh your first bar pretty stretched but i actually did like the bury em etc part of your bar, thought you couldve expanded on that a little more. for your rebuttal you cut down the lines but to me the content fell short

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v/Bahriman

PA bars come off kinda funky the way he writes it out. Easy fix if he looks around and adopts the same lay out as the others. 2nd Jones punch I’ve seen but it was ok. Def enough to take this one by itself.

V/Bah

PA had more of a swag and flow feel that was missing any definite punch. Bah had a nice rebuttal and easily gets this one I now based on content. PA work on your set ups and punches.
V/Bah

although more lengthy pharah had a smoother style .. was enjoyable to read. sadly the punch didnt do it for me. i got bahriman with the first bar. i think bahriman did way better last week but here we are

Bah wins