Week 12 - Ricantheoryz (2-4) vs Echelon (0-4) Rican wins.

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Monday and will be open until Wednesday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@R!canTheoryz @Echelon

Ricantheoryz?! I shuttle the concept..bubble with context..
SHOVING THE NONSENSE..like investiagating SEERS..
I'm above and beyond..better respond..
BECAUSE I'm COMING FOR YOUR NECK LIKE INSPECTAH DECK..
COMETH OH LIGHT from a hundred of shrines..
SUMMON THE LICE..I'm nothing and something..I'm everything..
I'm above and beyond the concept..I'm coming with context..
I'm above with the nonsense..coming with context..
I'm above with a sledgehammer..do damage..
I caught a bodyguard while doing the armistice..

Check.

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You know a dirty mechanic can rig ya wheels enough to prove Harms Formula,
Anything echo driving is considered a total loss & i ain’t talking demolishing ya moms Toyota.
A Yard threat? Nah I’ll pull up with a combo hit em wit a Hard Left,
Voters see echelon short cutted in a box quicker than a episode of Star Trek . .
I couldn’t wait to kill your lying ass. From biology to Violent acts,
Trust me nobody is paying attention to the studies of echelon kids usually fall asleep in science class.
Once I get that cool call two shots to ya gut will make dude crawl,
Your whole career in this league was just a scribble & that’s usually what parents let kids do over they room walls.
we can All see whos Colder with Trash Driving around to get folded up fast,
Cuz In the end I’ll still be forced to run on E like a person who can’t pull over for Gas.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Echelon

Ricantheoryz?! I shuttle the concept..bubble with context..
SHOVING THE NONSENSE..like investiagating SEERS..
Flames
I'm above and beyond..better respond..
BECAUSE I'm COMING FOR YOUR NECK LIKE INSPECTAH DECK..
Ridiculously dope
COMETH OH LIGHT from a hundred of shrines..
SUMMON THE LICE..I'm nothing and something..I'm everything..
DAMN
I'm above and beyond the concept..I'm coming with context..
I'm above with the nonsense..coming with context..
Wow! "I'm above with the nonsense" should be in your sig
I'm above with a sledgehammer..do damage..
I caught a bodyguard while doing the armistice..
simply amazing

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz

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You know a dirty mechanic can rig ya wheels enough to prove Harms Formula,
Anything echo driving is considered a total loss & i ain’t talking demolishing ya moms Toyota.
Nah. I'm not on board with getting "echo" from "echelon"
A Yard threat? Nah I’ll pull up with a combo hit em wit a Hard Left,
Voters see echelon short cutted in a box quicker than a episode of Star Trek . .
Don't get it tbh
I couldn’t wait to kill your lying ass. From biology to Violent acts,
Trust me nobody is paying attention to the studies of echelon kids usually fall asleep in science class.
I don't think you know what an echelon is... there's no obvious link to science class
Once I get that cool call two shots to ya gut will make dude crawl,
Your whole career in this league was just a scribble & that’s usually what parents let kids do over they room walls.
Weird wp and even weirder choice of flip... I'd honestly love to hear your process behind creating this bar. Fascinating stuff.
we can All see whos Colder with Trash Driving around to get folded up fast,
Cuz In the end I’ll still be forced to run on E like a person who can’t pull over for Gas.
Your best line. OK letter play

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A true honour to witness this clash of text legends. Echelon had a dope verse but I'm pleased to be able to finally say in all seriousness

V/ Rican

Vote Rican

Seen a few of the concepts before like E/gas. But you did more then enough to out punch Echelon who didn't punch.
Definitely room for improvement, but I'm sure it was a throw away verse.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Echelon

Ricantheoryz?! I shuttle the concept..bubble with context..
SHOVING THE NONSENSE..like investiagating SEERS..
I'm above and beyond..better respond..
BECAUSE I'm COMING FOR YOUR NECK LIKE INSPECTAH DECK..
COMETH OH LIGHT from a hundred of shrines..
SUMMON THE LICE..I'm nothing and something..I'm everything..
I'm above and beyond the concept..I'm coming with context..
I'm above with the nonsense..coming with context..
I'm above with a sledgehammer..do damage..
I caught a bodyguard while doing the armistice..
This is your second best verse. Gold in a box was far and away your best, then this and then the Nothing and Something saga. Keep your verses original like this one, the multi week storyline didn’t work as well as the shorter 10 bar acid trips.

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Vs

Quote:

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Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz

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You know a dirty mechanic can rig ya wheels enough to prove Harms Formula,
Anything echo driving is considered a total loss & i ain’t talking demolishing ya moms Toyota.
I dig the harms formula concept, it’s original. That said Toyota is a stretched rhyme and the wording kinda muffled the impact
A Yard threat? Nah I’ll pull up with a combo hit em wit a Hard Left,
Voters see echelon short cutted in a box quicker than a episode of Star Trek . .
Eh not feeling this one
I couldn’t wait to kill your lying ass. From biology to Violent acts,
Trust me nobody is paying attention to the studies of echelon kids usually fall asleep in science class.
I don’t follow this one
Once I get that cool call two shots to ya gut will make dude crawl,
Your whole career in this league was just a scribble & that’s usually what parents let kids do over they room walls.
Sorry man not seeing the punch
we can All see whos Colder with Trash Driving around to get folded up fast,
Cuz In the end I’ll still be forced to run on E like a person who can’t pull over for Gas.
I used this concept on him a while back too, this bar is ok

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V/Rican

we can All see whos Colder with Trash Driving around to get folded up fast,
Cuz In the end I’ll still be forced to run on E like a person who can’t pull over for Gas.


Seen better from you.


Ech had nothing


V/Rican

Echelon I'd Echelon

Rican probably had a throwaway verse here but did enough to win

v/ rican

R!canTheoryz wins 5-0.